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压轴题08读后续写新高考最突出的特点是增加了读后续写题型，读后续写是对考生阅读和写作的综合能力考查形式，是整个考卷中最难的题，它每年堪称是压轴题。读后续写总是以友爱互助、人和动物之间的和谐相处为主题。2023年高考对于读后续写的考查，友爱互助、人和动物之间的和谐相处仍将是主要话题。2023年1月的浙江高考英语试题及2023年四省联考试题都能闻到这个味道。三亲情故事类1.基本规律：读后续写中给出的故事本身难度不大，其核心是考查学生的续写能力，如果考生连给出的故事都看不懂，就无法展现考生的写作水平，这样的试题是失败的命题。读后续写和前面的故事构成一个完整的闭环的故事，这样才能较好的考查考生的水平。2．实用解题方法：押题速练1.[2021·新全国I卷]阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
12.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】1.原文情节情感线精读原文材料,理清情节脉络,把握基本信息(时间、地点、人物、事件、主题等),抓住情感主线。主题语境人与自我--生活与学习--家庭生活语篇话题本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为母亲节当天，双胞胎想要做一顿丰盛的早餐作为母亲节礼物，给母亲惊喜。情节梳理故事要素when：onMother’sDaywhere：Athomewho：Thetwins--JennaandJeffwhat：Thetwinsplannedtomakeadeliciousbreakfastfortheirmother.OnMother’sDay,theygotupearlyandbegantomakebreakfast.However,everythingdidn’tgosmoothlyastheywished.2.续文情节推理基于原文情节脉络和语篇立意,以步步设问的方式合情合理地预测可能的情节发展,最终勾勒出整个故事的完整脉络。情节走向通过第一段首句“Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.”可预测，续写思路为：爸爸指导--孩子重新尝试--进展顺利--成功--欣喜若狂。通过第二段首句“Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.”可预测，续写思路为：孩子们呈现惊喜给妈妈--妈妈喜极而泣--孩子们献上母亲节的祝福--母亲感动至极一家人幸福相拥。学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
2【参考范文】Possibleversion1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.Knowingwhathadhappened,insteadofscoldinghischildren,thefatherencouragedthemtocookbreakfastagain.Undertheirfather'sguidance,thekidsstartedtotryagainandeverythingwasgoingsmoothly.Whiletheywerefryingthebread,fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.Innotime,adeliciousbreakfaststartedtotakeshape.Wildwithjoy,theycouldn’twaittoletmomtastetheirhomemadebreakfast.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Awarmcurrentwelledupinherheart.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightly,saying''Thankyousomuch,JeffandJenna.Ibelieveitwillbethebestbreakfastinmylife."Hearingthis,thetwinssmiledproudly.Possibleversion2:Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.①Seeingtheblackbreadandthespilledporridge,Fathersuddenlyfiguredouttheirsecret.Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.Withoutasecondthought,Fatherofferedtohelp.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.②Theyhelpedcleanthekitchenwhiletheirfathercookedasandwichandsomeporridgeskillfully.Soon,thedelicioussmellofbreakfastpermeatedthekitchen.③Fafherhintedtoshowthatitwasasecretandwentbacktothebedroom,askingthetwinstogoontocarryouttheirgreatplan.Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theyyelled“HappyMother'sDay,darlingMummy!Abigsurpriseforyou!”④Whenshesawthebreakfast,hereyeswidenedupandtwinkledwithexcitement.Fatherwaspretendingtobesurprisedtoseesuchdeliciousfood.Motherhuggedthetwinsandshowedherthanks.Shetasteditandpraisedthatitwasthebestbreakfastshehadeverhad.Thetwinssmiledattheirfathersecretly.⑤Afeelingoflovefilledthewholeroom.Whatabeautifulsurprise!Possibleversion3:Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father'sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.Aftertheyexplainedthattheyweretryingtomakeasurprisefortheirmom,Fathersmiledandhelpedcleanupthestovefirst.①Thenunderhisguidance,JeffstoodbythepotandstirredtheporridgefromtimetotimewhileJennacarefullyfriedtheFrenchtoast.Itwasallrightthistime.Beforelong,thedeliciousbreakfastwasready.Howhappythetwinswere!Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.②“Surprise!HappyMother'sDay!Mummy!”Theysaidinchorus,theireyestwinkingwithexcitement.Theirfatherlaughedheartilyandtoldherthatthetwinshadpreparedbreakfastforher.③Soshockedanddelightedwasshethatshehuggedthetwinstightly,tearsofjoywellingupinhereyes,“Thanks，mydearkids.”Itwasnotonlythesurprise,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.④Indeed,loveshouldbemadeknowntolovedones.学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
3押题速练2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Rick,aten-year-oldboy,wasconstantlyangryateverythingaroundhim.Healwaysfoughtinschoolwiththeotherkids.Oncehehadanoutburstinschool.Upsetbysomethingaclassmatesaidtohim,hepushedtheboy,andafighthappened.Whentheteachersteppedintobreakitup,Rickwentcrazy,throwingpapersandbooksaroundtheclassroomandrushingout.Histeacherscouldn’tsayanythingthatwouldcomfortthekid.Andtheparentsofhisschoolmatesweregettingconcerned.Rickwasearningquitethereputation.Aftertalkingwithschoolofficials,Rick’smomtriedeverythingshecouldtocalmRickdown.Shetrieddifferentmethodsuntilonedayshecamehomewithacanvas(画布)andpaint.“What’sthis?”,Rickasked.Rick’smomhandedoverthepaintingequipmentandsaid,“Wheneveryoufeelangry,paintwhateveryou’reangryaboutinsteadofburstingout.”Rickwasn’tthathappyaboutitbuthegaveitatryanyway.Overthenextfewweeks,theyoungboycreatedseveralartworks.Theymostlyshoweddisturbingimagesthough.SohismomtookallofthepaintingsandcalledRickoversothattheycouldtalkaboutthem.“Tellme,Rick.Whatarethesepaintingsabout?”“Well,thefirstpaintingisabouthowsomeofthekidsshowofftheirnewclothesandpencilcases.ThenextpaintingisaboutmyteacherwhokeepstellingmeabouthowI’mdoingthingswrong.Andthelastpaintingisabouthowoneofmyschoolmate’sfathersuggestedthatIchangemyattitude.Allofthemmakemesoangry.”Rick’smom,inacalmvoice,tookRickbyhersideandtoldhim:“Don’tyouseeit,Rick?”“Seewhat?”Rickasked.“You’resoangryatallofthesethingsbutnotoncedidyoutrytounderstandwhyyou’regettingsoangry.Whathaveallthesepeopledonetoyou,really?”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Rickwaslostinthought._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Rickknewitwastimetochange._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
4Rickwaslostinthought.Itslowlydawnedonhimthatpeoplehewasangryathaddonenothingwrong.Hisclassmateswhoshowedtheirnewclothesandpencilcasestoothersmightjustwanttosharetheirhappinesswithfriends.Histeacherdidblamehimbecausehewasbeingaproblem.Andhisschoolmate’sfatherwasjusttryingtohelphimcorrecthismistakes.Theyhadnointentiontohurthimbuthejustlethisunreasonableangerconsumehimandhurtthem.Howridiculoushehadbeen!Rickknewitwastimetochange.Fromthenon,Ricktriedhisbesttocontrolhistemper.Everytimehefelthewastoexplode,hewouldwalkawayandaskhimselfwhyhewasangryandwhetheritwasreasonabletobeangry.Thenhewouldfindhispeaceandlaughedhisangeraway.Gradually,everyonesawadifferentRick.Henolongershoutedatothersorthrewthingsaway.Hechattedwithclassmatesafterclassandcomplimentedtheirnewclothesandpencilcases.Heevenhelpedteacherscarrybooksbeforeclasssometimes.Rick’schangesurprisedeveryonean【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个十岁的男孩Rick总是因为周围的各种事情发脾气，经常和同学打架。他的妈妈在尝试过各种方法无效后，终于有一天，他对妈妈带来的一块画布和颜料有了一点兴趣，于是在妈妈的建议下，他开始尝试创作绘画以转移自己的坏脾气，并且描述了自己所画的各种让他生气的人物和场景。逐渐地，在妈妈平和的引导下，他开始反思自己的行为，最终作出了改变。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“Rick陷入了沉思。”可知，第一段可描写Rick开始重新思考并逐渐理解了以前令他生气的那些同学、家长和老师的行为。②由第二段首句内容“Rick知道是时候作出改变了。”可知，第二段可描写Rick是如何改变的，描述具体的行为，最终让自己和周围的人都感到了快乐。2.续写线索：沉思——豁然开朗——具体描述他的理解——决定改变——如何改变（具体行为）——获得快乐押题速练3阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。SeeingtheUnitedParcelTruckpullintomydriveway,IopenedthegaragedoorknowingthatanotherpackagehadarrivedhelpinguswiththeChristmasinJulyPartywewereputtingtogetherforthehomelesschildrenatalocalcharity.AsIstoodwatchingthedrivergetthepackagesfromthebackofthetruck,IsawMadison,mythree-year-oldgranddaughter,pickingweedsfromthelawn.“Theseareformymommyanddaddy,”shereplied,assheheldoutahandfullofworthlesslittleweeds.IjustsmiledandnoddedmyheadasIlookedathertightlittleclosedfist.TheUPTdriverwalkedintothegarageandsatthetwopackagesdownonthewoodenbench.HeandIstoodtalkingaboutthenumerousbaseballgloves,baseballbats,helmetsandbaseballssittingabouttheroom.ItoldhimIhadbeenraisedinaJacksonville,FloridaorphanageandthatduringmyentirechildhoodIneveronceownedanythingofmyown.Itoldhimthatthesepresentswereforthechildrenthemselvesandnotfortheorphanage.Aftertalkingforafewminutes,thedrivertoldmehehadtoleave.Hewavedandbeganwalkingbackdownthedriveway.Iturnedaround,lockedgaragedoorandbeganwalkingupontothefrontporch.JustasIclosedthegate,MadisoncamerunninguptowhereIwasstanding.“Myflowers,myflowers,”shescreamedaloud.IsoonrealizedthatIhadlockedherweedsinthegarage.注意：学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
51.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“We’llgetthemlater,”Itoldher,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iturnedaround,walkedbacktotheendoftheporchandopenedthegate.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】“We’llgetthemlater,”Itoldher.Ijustdidnotwanttowalkbackdownthestairsandunlockthegaragedoorforabunchofworthlessweeds.Puttingmyhandontohersmallshoulder,Ibegandirectingherbackintothehouse.Shestoodtherewithtearswellingupinhereyes.“Theseflowersarespeciallyformymommyanddaddy,”shesobbed.Allofasudden,Irealizedthatthosebaseballgloveswerelikegoldtothosehomelesschildrenjustasthoseweedswerebeautifulflowerstomygranddaughter.Iturnedaround,walkedbacktotheendoftheporchandopenedthegate.ThenIwalkeddownthethreestairs,tookoutmykeysandopenedthegaragedoor.Wearingashiningsmileonherface,Madisonranpastme,grabbingthelittletreasuresshehadpickedmomentsbefore.“Thankyou,grandma,Iloveyou!”shesaid.Ikneltdown,lookedthroughthegreen,nowlifelessweedsandsmiledasIsawthebeautyofadozenbeautifulredrosesreflectinginhereyes.Asisoftenthecase,somethingvaluelesstoadultsmeansalottochildren.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家为当地慈善机构的无家可归的孩子们举办的7月圣诞派对，孙女说她专门为父母准备了花，其实只是杂草。一开始作者并不重视孙女要打开车库门的请求，后来认识到了孙女的用心，非常感动。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我告诉她：‘我们一会儿再去拿。’”可知，第一段可描写孙女被拒绝后的伤心反应，作者的感悟和反应。②由第二段首句内容“我转过身，走回门廊的尽头，打开了门。”可知，第二段可描写作者为孙女开门拿东西，认识到了一些对成年人来说毫无价值的东西对孩子来说却很重要。2.续写线索：拒绝开车库门——孙女哭泣——感悟——打开库门——孙女开心——感悟押题速练4阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Atfiveyearsold,myyoungestdaughterLisetteshouldhavebeenwaytooyoungformetobetalkingtoheraboutguardianangels.ButhereIwas,standingnexttoanadult-sizedstretcher(担架),asherchild-sizedbodylay学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
6inahugewhitesheet.Shewasabouttobewheeledinforhersecondbrainsurgery.Bornwithhydrocephalus(脑积水),Lisettehadherfirstbrainsurgeryatsevenmonthsold.Littledidweknowthenthatthiswouldbethefirstofmanycorrectivesurgeriestocome,andthatshewouldspendalotoftimeattheChildren’sHospitalofPhiladelphia.ItookholdofLisette’shands.Aswelockedeyeswitheachother,Iheldhertinyhandsinmineandaskedherifshecouldfeelherguardianangelsaroundher.Shelookedaroundasifshecouldseeandfeeleachangel,andsheresponded,“Yes,Icanfeelthem.”AsIhadhoped,thisbecameaninstrumentoffaithwecouldbothrelyoneverytimewefacedanotherchallengingprocedure.Wewouldholdhands,andIwouldintroducehertoherguardianangels.Oncesheacknowledgedtheirpresence,shewouldbereadytoletgoandfacewhatcamenext.ThenandonlythenwouldIallowthemtotakeheraway.Monthslater,LisetteandIstoppedbymymother’shouseforaroutinevisit.Forsomeunknownreason,asweenteredmymother’shouse,westoppedrightinfrontofthefirstdoorinthehallway,whichledtomymothersbedroom.Thisparticularroomwasusuallyoff-limitstothegrandchildren,asthereweremanybreakablesondisplay.BeforeIcouldregisterwhatshewasupto,Lisettemadeherwayquicklyandboldlyintohergrammy’sroom.AsIrushedtoleadheroutofthebedroom,mymotherdecidedtomakeanexceptionsinceLisettewasn’ttouchingordisturbinganything.“Letherbe,”mymotherinsisted,andwemadeourselvescomfortablerightthereinthedoorframe(框)sothatwecouldkeepaneyeonLisettewhilesheexploredtheroom.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AsmymotherandIchattedawayaboutourday,IwasdistractedbyLisette’slittlevoiceinthebackground.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ipulleddownthephoto. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
7【参考范文】AsmymotherandIchattedawayaboutourday,IwasdistractedbyLisette’slittlevoiceinthebackground.Herclearlittlevoicemademeremindedofmyownchildhood.JustasweweretalkingaboutthehappymomentswhenIwasLisette’sage,Lisetteletoutacrywhichdrewbothofourattention.Shepointedataphotoinanalbumonthewallandsaid:“Mom,Thatismyguardianangel,Iseeher!”AsecondlookconfirmedmethatitwasaphotoofmedressedlikeanangeltakenwhenIwasLisette’sage.Ipulleddownthephoto.Lisetteholditallherwayhomeasifshefoundsomethingpriceless.Thephotowasputuponherbedroomwall.EverynightwhenIfinishedthebedsidestoryshewouldinformmethesamewords:Mom,thatismyguardianangel.ThesmileonherfacemeltedmyheartandIknewthatIalsofoundmyownangel,mydaughterLisette.【解析】本文以情感发展为线索展开，讲述了作者的女儿小时候被诊断出脑积水，经历了数次手术，作者引导孩子感受守护天使的存在，孩子从一个照片中看到了守护天使并找到了安全感，也让作者感受到了她自己的守护天使就是女儿。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当我和妈妈闲聊过往的日子的时候，背景中莉赛特稚嫩的声音吸引了我。”可知，第一段可描写作者倾听莉赛特的话，想起了自己小时候，然后听到女儿说看见了自己的守护天使。。②由第二段首句内容“我拿下了那张照片。”可知，第二段可描写莉赛特非常喜欢这张照片，贴在卧室的墙上，每天晚上睡觉前都会看着照片微笑着进入梦乡，使作者也找到了自己的守护天使。2.续写线索：闲聊——想起小时候——发出尖叫——拿下照片——贴在墙上——带着微笑进入梦乡——找到自己的守护天使——感悟押题速练5阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Throughoutlife,wecomeacrossmanypeoplewhoimpactusinaway.Theirimpactcanbeforadayorforalifetime.It’scommonnottorecognizetheimpactsomeonehasleftonyouuntilacertainmoment.Thepersonwholeftagreatimpactonmeismydad.Threemonthsafterturningfourteen,mylifewasgreat.Iwasgettingsettledintoahighschool;mygradeswerealreadystartingoffgreatlyandIwasmakingfriends.OnedayasIcamehomefromschool,Iwalkedintothelivingroom,findingmymomanddadtalking.Myparentsturnedtomeandtoldmetositdownbecausetherewassomethingimportanttheyhadtotellme.Isoonfoundoutthatmydad’sliverwasfailingandheneededanimmediatetransplant.Iwasshockedandconfusedbecausemydadseemedfine.Hewasworkingandneverlookedsick.Myparentstoldmenottoworrybecauseeverythingwouldbefine.Fourmonthshadpassedandmydadstillhadnotreceivedanewliver;hewasprogressivelygettingworse.Hisbodyseemedtobegettingweaker,butheconstantlysaidhewasfine.Itwasgettinghardformyfamilyandme.Mydadhadtoquithisjobleavingmymomtobetheonlyprovider.Ihadtotakeontheresponsibilityofcleaningthehouse,cookingmealsandcheckingonmydadwhilemymomwasatwork.Ihadtocutbackonhangingwithmyfriendsbecausemydadwasbeginningtogoinandoutofthehospital.Myfocusforschoolwasstartingtoslip.Soweremygrades.Twonightsbeforemyschoolspringbreak,mymomreceivedacallfromthehospitalthatmydadhadbeeninacaraccidentandthathewasin学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
8hospital.Surprisingly,mydadhadn’treceivedascratchonhim.Thennextnightmymomreceivedacallfromthedoctorstatingthattherewasaliverthatmatchedmydad’sbodyandthatheneededtogettothehospitalimmediately.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。MyparentsandIrushedtothehospital.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihadtotakeonsomanyresponsibilitiesathome.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyparentsandIrushedtothehospital.Aftervariousexaminations,myfatherwasrushedintotheoperatingroom,leavingmymotherandmeabigsmilefromwhichwereadthewordFINE.Threehours’waitingseemedlikealifetimeduringwhichmymotherkeptcomfortingmebysaying“Yourdadsaideverythingwillbejustfine!”Thetimewhenthedooropenedandoutcameasmilingdoctorwhoinformedusthegoodnews,mymotherburstintotears.Threeweekslatermyfatherwasabletobeoutofthehospitalbuthestillneededspecialcareathomewhichwasaresponsibilityofmebecausemymotherhadtoworkalldayoutside.Ihadtotakeonsomanyresponsibilitiesathome.Houseworkandthecareformyfathertookupmostoftheday,leavinglittletimeformystudy.Buteverydaymyfathertoldmethesamething“Honey,everythingwillbejustfine!”Sixmonthslater,myfatherwasfullyrecoveredandfouryearslaterIgraduatedasatopstudent.Timetookawaysomanyhappymomentsofmyfamilybutleftussomethingmostimportant“Honey,everythingwillbejustfine!”【解析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者得知父亲生病，与母亲一起承担起家庭的重担，帮助父亲治病、最终痊愈的故事并以优异的成绩毕业的故事。整个过程中，父亲的一句“亲爱的，一切都会好的”成为了作者和母亲的精神支柱，深深地影响着作者的成长过程。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我爸妈和我快速赶往医院。”可知，第一段可描写父亲在医院接受手术、作者和母亲焦急等待但父亲的一句话成了作者和妈妈的精神支柱的过程。②由第二段首句内容“我不得不在家里承担如此重担。”学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
9可知，第二段可描写作者在家里既要做家务，又要照顾爸爸，同时还要复习功课，但父亲的那句话让作者鼓起了勇气，成功地帮助父亲恢复健康，同时还以优异的成绩毕业。2.续写线索：去医院——等待——手术成功——回家疗养——承担重任——照顾父亲——毕业——感想押题速练6阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Oneweekend,MumandDadbothhadtowork,whichmeantthatneitherofthemhadtimetolookafterJoeandBella.Butthetwokidsdidn’tmind.TheyweregoingtospendtheweekendwithGran,andGranhadpromisedtotakethemtothebeach!ButwhentheywokeuponSaturdaymorning,andlookedoutofthewindow,theyfoundtherainwaspouringdown!Bellapressedhernoseagainsttheglassandsaidhopefully,“Wecanstillgo,can’twe?”ButwhenGranarrivedtocollectthem,itwasstillpouring,andGransaidtheywouldjusthavetospendthedayatherhouseinstead.TheytriedtakingGran’sdog,Selby,forawalk,butwhentheyopenedthedoor,Selbytookonelookandranbackinsideagain!Theydidsomehomework,readyforMonday,andwhentheystopped—itwasstillrainingEventually,Granwentofftodosomehousework.Joedecidedtodomorehomework.HehadtestscomingupatschoolandMumandDadwerealwaysonathimtoworkharder.Joeaskedhissistertokeepquiet.Afterawhile,though,heheardnoisesfromthekitchen.WhatwasBellaupto?Hegotupandlookedroundthedoor.Bellawasmixingsomethinginahugemixingbowl.“What’sthat?”Joeasked,alittleannoyed.“It’salovelycake,”saidBellahappily.“Butyoucan’thaveany.”“That’sarelief,”saidJoe.“Becauseitlooksterrible.Anditsmellsworse!”ThecakemixturehadallkindsofthingsinitandthesmellwaslikenocakethatJoehadeversmelledbefore!“It’snotforhumans,”saidBella.“It’sfordogs.I’vemadeitspeciallyforSelby,becausehecouldn’tgoforhiswalk.”“Well,IhopeSelbylikesit,”Joesaid.ButSelbydidn’tlikeit.WhenBellaputitdownonthefloorforhimtoeat,Selbytookonesmellandthenranoutoftheroom!Bellaburstintotears.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Grancamerunningintothekitchen.Sheaskedwhathappened.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
10Aftertheymadeabeautifulcakeforhumans,therainstopped.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Grancamerunningintothekitchen.Sheaskedwhathappened.“It’sraining,”Bellahowled.“It’snevergoingtostop!Wecan’tgotothebeach!AndnowSelbydoesn’tlikemycake!”“Nowthen,”saidGranny.“Thingsaren’tthatbad.Whydon’twedosomethingtocheerourselvesuponarainyday?”“Likewhat?”sniffedBella.“Howaboutmakingacakeasasurpriseforyourparents?Afterall,theycan’tbelieveyoucanmakeanything,letaloneacakeforthem.”“Great!”criedBellaandJoe.Theythreehadalovelytimemakingthecaketogether.Aftertheymadeabeautifulcakeforhumans,therainstopped.“Quick,let’sgetoutwhilethesun’sshining!”saidGranny.Theywenttotheparkwiththedog,andwhentheygotback,MumandDadhadarrivedfromwork.Bellafeltreallyhappythateverybodyinthefamilywasjustreadyforasliceofcake!【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个周末，妈妈和爸爸都要工作，这意味着他们都没有时间照顾乔和贝拉。但两个孩子并不介意。他们要和奶奶一起过周末，奶奶答应带他们去海滩!但是当他们在星期六早上醒来，向窗外看去时，他们发现雨正在倾盆而下！最终在奶奶的提议下，他们在家里给父母做了一个蛋糕，度过了愉快的时光。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“奶奶跑进厨房。她问发生了什么事。”可知，第一段可描写奶奶提议做蛋糕。②由第二段首句内容“他们为人类做了一个漂亮的蛋糕后，雨停了。”可知，第二段可描写蛋糕完成后的事情，雨停了他们出去散了步。2.续写线索：进厨房——贝拉不高兴——提议做蛋糕——做蛋糕——完成蛋糕——雨停——散步学科网（北京）股份有限公司学科网（北京）股份有限公司
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