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读后续写微讲座三：读通(感情发展)外刊输入——悟语言之道WorkingoutinaNewWayThemostpopularPEclassatWaukeganHighSchoolinIllinois,US,takesplaceinthestadium.Itistheschool'sversionofCrossFit,thedifficultworkoutthathasexplodedinpopularityoverthelast16yearsatthousandsofgyms.IthasmorethanonemilliondevoteesandaprofessionalcompetitionshownonESPN.SchoolsaroundtheChicagoareahaveadoptedCrossFittointereststudentsatatimeofarisingweightproblemamongyoungpeople,andmostsayitreallyworkscomparedwithtraditionalgymclasses.“Ithinkit'sagreatwaytoteachkidslifelongfitness,especiallythosekidswhoaren'tinterestedinhockey,soccerorbasketball，”saidteacherTracyHarafofIllinois'StonyCreekElementary.“Theythinkit'stough,buttheymentionedtheirperformancehasimproved.”Butsomedoctorsandresearchersadvisecaution,sayingworkoutsthatinvolveliftingweightscanleadtoinjuries,particularlywhenperformedbyinexperiencedpeople.DoctorCraigFinlaysonatLurieChildren'sHospitalofChicagosaidhewasworriedthatwhilestrengthtraininghasapositiveeffectonkids,heavyweightscouldbetroubleforteenagerswhomighthurtthemselvesbytryingtodotoomuchorusingpoorform.CrossFitInc.,thecompanythatcertifies(发证书)trainersandlicensesgyms,disagreesthatitsprogramismoredangerouscomparedwithotherfitnessroutines,likejogging.Thecompanyevensued(控告)overaresearcharticlethatfound16percentofaCrossFitgrouphadstoppedparticipatingbecauseofoveruseorinjury,sayingthestatisticpresentingCrossFitasunsafewasnotscientific.GymteacherslikeWaukegan'sGregMoisio,alsosaytheriskofinjurycanbereducedwithproperteachingandCrossFit'sflexibility.Moisioreferredtoaworkoutcalled“DeathbyBurpees”，whereeveryoneminuteand20seconds,studentsrunalapandperformanincreasingnumberofburpees—amovementinvolvingasquat(蹲下),apushupandajumpwithhandsheldabovethehead.Thechallengeistokeepgoingaslongasyoucan.“That'sthegreatthing,becausesomethinglikerunningthemile,theworstkidisalwayslast，”Moisiosaid.“Everybodyknowswho'slast;thesenseoffailurewillmakethemloseheart.That'saterriblefeelingforakid.Now,nooneknowswhodroppedoutinroundthreebecausethey'retooworriedabouttryingtogettheirownbuttaroundthetrack.”学科网（北京）股份有限公司
11.重点词汇再现(1)workout 锻炼(2)stadiumn.体育场(3)competitionn.竞争，竞赛(4)compare...with与……比较(5)gymn.体操训练(6)fitnessn.健康(7)soccern.足球(8)injuryn.伤害；损伤(9)strengthn.力量；体力(10)positiveadj.积极的(11)jogn.慢跑(12)pushupn.俯卧撑(13)failuren.失败(14)loseheart丧失信心；泄气(15)trackn.跑道2．经典句型再现：名词短语作同位语(1)Itistheschool'sversionofCrossFit,thedifficultworkoutthathasexplodedinpopularityoverthelast16yearsatthousandsofgyms.这是学校版的交叉健身法，这项高难度的运动在过去16年里在数千家健身房大受欢迎。(2)CrossFitInc.thecompanythatcertifies(发证书)trainersandlicensesgyms,disagreesthatitsprogramismoredangerouscomparedwithotherfitnessroutines.CrossFit公司，一家认证、颁发教练和健身房执照的公司，不认同这个项目比其他健身项目更危险。Ⅱ迷你语料库(MiniCorpus)序号佳句呈现赏析1Asaplayer,LangPingbroughthonourandglorytohercountry.描写运动员的句子。特别注意honour和glory，表示“荣耀”。2Asaperson,LangPingisloved描写人物受欢迎。athomeand学科网（北京）股份有限公司
2byfansathomeandabroad.abroad意为“国内外”。3TheteamthatLangPinghadbuiltwas①fallingapart②.①定语从句，修饰先行词theteam。②fallapart意为“破裂；破碎；崩溃”。4Losingtwoimportantplayerswasabigchallenge,butLangPingdidnotloseheart.描述在困难面前，不灰心丧气。动名词作主语，谓语动词要用单数形式。5Thenin2016,LangPingledhervolleyballteamtoOlympicgoldinBrazil.描述人物具有领导力。leadsb.toOlympicgold意为“带领……获得奥运会金牌”。6WhenMichaelJordan'sfeetlefttheground,timeseemedtostandstill.描述“飞人”乔丹，运用了夸张的写作手法。timeseemedtostandstill意为“时间似乎都凝固了”。7Theplayerwhobecameknownas“AirJordan”changedbasketball①withhisgracefulmovesandjumps②.①who引导的定语从句修饰先行词theplayer。②“with＋名词”作状语。8Jordan'sskillswereimpressive,butthementalstrengththatheshowedmadehimunique.描述人物，特别注意两个形容词impressive和unique。9Jordansaysthatthesecrettohissuccessislearningfromhisfailures.thesecrettohissuccessisdoingsth.意为“他成功的秘诀是做某事”。续 表序号佳句呈现赏析10Icanacceptfailure;everyonefailsatsomething.ButIcan'tacceptnottrying.本句是乔丹的名言，说明遇到失败时，不气馁，坚持尝试。11Losinggamestaughthimto学科网（北京）股份有限公司
3practiseharderandnevergiveup.本句适用于描述失败之后勇敢的状态。12Ialmostwentbananas,too.谚语，表示“我几乎发疯了”。13Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference！havenoidea后接同位语从句；makeadifference意为“有影响的；起作用”。14OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight①，thingsbegantochange②.①once引导时间状语从句。②概括描述情况的变化。15RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed①，Iaddedhealthyfoodsto②mymeals.①ratherthan表示“而不是”，作状语，前置放句首，表示强调。②add...to...意为“把……添加到……”。16Finally,Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.描述自我接纳。comparing和lookingfor并列作stop的宾语。17Instead,ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.描述自我接纳。makealistof意为“列清单”。18Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.描述通过努力，增加信心，并接受自我。Ⅲ读后续写起始篇：读通——感情发展(Feelingdevelopment)故事类记叙文有两条线索，一是情节(plot)发展线索，二是感情(feeling)发展线索。通常情况下，随着情节的发展，文章的主角感情会随之发生变化。所以，对文章的整体把握就离不开对角色感情发展的分析。对于感情发展线索的梳理有两个要点。第一，按照情节发展的顺序，逐步获取表示感情的词汇、句型及表达，进而获取感情的发展。第二，要特别关注感情最大的变化。这是记叙文的核心，往往也是最大冲突的爆发点和续写的基础。学科网（北京）股份有限公司
4【典题精析】阅读下面的材料，完成以下任务。Mariawaspracticingwithhersoccermatesinatinyschoolyard.TheywereallfromRiverEdgeRockers,asoccerteamoftheircommunity.Suddenly,theballflewintoadeepholeattheedgeoftheyard.Itwasthethirdtimethattheyhadlosttheirballthismonth.Withouttheball,Mariahadtowavegoodbyetohermatesandwenthome,depressed.“Ifonlytherewerearegulationsoccerfield！”shethought.Thatevening,seeingherlowspirits,herfatherasked,“Whatwasthematter,dear？”“Iwasjustthinkingaboutplayinginabrandnewsoccerfield！”Mariaanswered.Herfathersmiledandsaid，“Tomorrow,aTownCouncilmeetingistobeheldtodiscussabouttheuseofthatvacant(空着的)lotnexttothepetstore,HomeforPets.Whynottakethisopportunitytoconvincethemweneedabetterfield？”Thenextday,withthecompanyofherfather,Mariaandherteammateswenttothemeetinghall.Ontheirarrival,theysawCouncilwomanJillandsomecitizensalreadythere.Theytooktheirseats.AfterJillannouncedthestartofthediscussion,Mariastoodupandspokefirst.“Uptillnowthereisnosoccerfieldinourcommunity,whichcertainlyaffectsourphysicalhealth.Ourteamcurrentlyhavetopracticeinatinyschoolyard,andonlywhenit'snotalreadybooked.”MrsLorries,ownerofthepetstore,commented,“Icouldn'tagreemore.Kidsdoneedsuchafield.”TheRockersapplaudedexcitedlyandtheothercitizensallagreeditwouldbeawayout.“Asoccerfieldwouldbeagooduseforthatlotwithovergrownweedsandsomelargerocks,buttobuildsuchonewouldneedasmallsumofmoneyandmaybeyouevenneedtodoalltheworkonyourown.”CouncilwomanJillsmiled,“Canyoumanageit？”Thinkingforawhile,Marianoddedwithadeterminedlookonherface,“TheRockerscandoit!Wewillturnitintoasoccerfield.”Theteammatesallcheered.1．情节与感情发展(Plotdevelopmentandfeelingdevelopment)结构(Structure)情节发展(Plotdevelopment)感情发展(Feelingdevelopment)开端(Beginning)Paragraph1Mariaandhersoccermateswanteda__regulation__soccer__field．Ifonlytherewerearegulationsoccerfield!用感叹句表示玛丽亚对现在球场的不满/失望和对新球场的渴望。学科网（北京）股份有限公司
5发展(RisingAction)Paragraphs2－7Maria'sfathersuggestedusing__the__vacant__lot__next__to__the__pet__store．Thenextday,CouncilwomanJill,MrsLorries,owner__of__the__pet__storeandothercitizensagreedonthemeeting.Buttobuildaregulationsoccerfieldwouldneeda__small__sum__of__moneyandevenneedto__do__all__the__work__by__Maria__and__her__teammates．文章最大的冲突：宠物店旁边的空地可以用作新球场，但是必须由玛丽亚和她的队员们自己筹钱并且自己动手改造。...seeingherlowspirits...说明玛丽亚对旧球场的不满/失望。Herfathersmiledandsaid...说明爸爸对玛丽亚的支持和疼爱。Icouldn'tagreemore.此处应用了“否定词＋比较级”表示最高级含义，表明洛瑞女士对玛丽亚的支持。Kidsdoneedsuchafield.此处应用了“do＋动词原形”表示对谓语动词的强调，表明洛瑞女士对玛丽亚的支持。TheRockersapplaudedexcitedly...表明了队员们的兴奋之情。Jillsmiled...表明了吉尔对玛丽亚的支持。高潮(Climax)Paragraph8Mariaandherteammateswere__willing__toacceptthechallengetotransformthe__vacant__lotintoaregulationsoccerfield.高潮：玛丽亚和队员们乐意接受挑战。Marianoddedwithadeterminedlookonherface...表明了玛丽亚下定决心、坚定的心情。Theteammatesallcheered.表明玛丽亚的队友们同样下定决心、坚定的心情。学科网（北京）股份有限公司
6尾声(FallingAction)Mariaandherteammatesmanagedtoraiseenoughmoneyandtriedtheirbesttoovercomeallthedifficulties.(做出合理预测)虽然很辛苦和疲惫，但是他们乐意付出努力和劳动，充满了欢乐。结局(Ending)Theysucceededtransformingthelotwithovergrownweedsandsomelarge__rocksintoaregulationsoccerfield.2.情节山体现感情发展(Feelingdevelopmentonplotmountain)Maria&herteammates'→→→答案：①Mariaandhersoccermateswantedaregulationsoccerfield.②ButtobuildaregulationsoccerfieldwouldneedasmallsumofmoneyandevenneedtodoalltheworkbyMariaandherteammates.③Mariaandherteammateswerewillingtoacceptthechallenge.④Mariaandherteammatesmanagedtoraiseenoughmoneyandtriedtheirbesttoovercomeallthedifficulties.⑤Theysucceededtransformingthelotwithovergrownweedsandsomelargerocksintoaregulationsoccerfield.学科网（北京）股份有限公司
