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15ItwastheMid-AutumnDayyesterday,andIজvwmyforeignfriendHarrytospendtheঝtraditionallyfestivalwithmyfamily.traditionalAt(3)Athedinnertable,myfatherটwaswarmlywelcomedHarry.Hesaid,"ThisisafamilyreuniondinnerforaChinesefamilyontheMid-AutumnDay,sotodayyouarecertainlyoneofourfamily."Harrywassohappyঠofcourse,......d.?i/^,preparing..enjoyedthedeliciousChinesedishes^bymymother.preparedIntheevening,wesatintheyard,listeningtosomebeautifulaboutthemoonandsharingadmireHOW..........zrxthem©JTTradmiring"emoon.anamazingdayIvehadtoday!IwillneverforgetHarrysaid.6᪆জὃ᝱஺!":᧤ᜩh4⁚ᡃ⍸ᡃḄ᜜¡¢£¤¥¦ᡃḄ§L?¨©ª«¬⁚1஺᪷7and®☢Ḅ!°:;┯ᜐ<±ᵨ?²©³ᦑinviteᦋinvited□ঝὃ஺┯ᜐfestivalḄ´◤ᵨᦑtraditionallyᦋtraditional஺ঞὃ¶஺!":ᙠ⚶¸Hᡃ᱄ºa¤¥⊤Y»¼½¾஺┯ᜐ¿Ḅtableᙠ>!4⊤Yᱯᢣ,◤=¶Âᵨᦑᙠdinnertable®Ãthe஺টὃ´᝱஺Ä´myfather=welcomeÄÅᐵÇ,
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16Proofreading13It'sbeentwoyearswhenIjoinedthecampusradiostation.Duringthistime,Ihaddoneseveralinterviews.EverytimeIfinishtowritinganarticle,IamproudofmyselfforabletointroducemyschoolmatestothethingsFveseen.Itwasdifficultattimes,butwhenIsawmystoriespublishinourschoolnewspaper,youknewthatitwassomethingworthdoing.Myparents,teachersandschoolmatescongratulatedmeonthatIdid.IfelthappilywhenIsharedanewstorywiththem.Thegreatestthingaboutbeingthereporterisexchangingideawithothers.(ᫀ.when..........had.,Itsbeentwoyears‘ᡭ▲૘TJoinec*campusradiostation.Duringthistime,TI-ᗐdoneseveralinterviews.EverytimeIfinishto©writinganarticle,Iamproudofmyselffor/0૛abletointroducemyschoolmatestothethingsI'veseen.Itwasdifficultattimes,butwhenIsawmystoriespublish.[,you........,..publishedourschoolnewspaper,1knewthatitwassomethingworthdoing.Myparents,teachersandi.ithat-ihappily1Tli>schoolmatescongratulatedmeon—Tt2@Idid.IfelthappwhenIsharedanewstorywiththem.The..i.the...idea...greatestthingaboutbeing4reporterisexchanging5easothers.67᪆জὃ:஺;:=>ᡃ@ᐭ᪥CDEFGᩭIJKLM஺ὃN:Ithasbeen/is+OPQR+since++STᵨOUVWQ᝱Y஺ঝὃQ᝱஺;:ᙠ\]Rᡃ^M_`ab஺DuringthistimecQRdQTefᵨgᙠhᡂQ᝱ijfᵨklឋTḄOUVWQ᝱nopᜐqrshadᦋᡂhave஺ঞὃ"T஺;:uvᡃᑏhOxᦻz……஺finishdoingsth.hᡂ^|},finishᵨTc஺টὃ"T஺;:……ᡃ==ᡃr%ᡃḄᡠ஺pᜐforᵨTcḄ஺beabletooO⊤r,ᦑ@being»ঠὃ"T஺;:……noᡃᑮᡃḄᦑ}ᙠ᪥⊤Q……஺seesth.doneᑮ|}^pᜐVWᑖ⊤T¡hᡂ஺17⚓ᐳ24⚓

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