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英语四六级写作讲义编讲：张培（新浪微博：@张培老师）★★★第一部分：知己知彼：四\六级作文高分必须知道的四大核心问题Q1：字数与段落要求：_________Q2：评分具体细则：_____________Q3：高分作文的标志：____________Q4：临考前如何准备：____________★★★第二部分：囤积粮草：PartOne：必背高分闪光表达1、解决问题_______________2、对某事产生影响______________3、在某事上起作用______________4、关注（重视）某事____________5、付出努力做某事______________6、采取措施做某事______________7、阐述原因（导致这个趋势/现象的原因有很多）8、对于某个现象/问题观点不同9、阐述重要性10、描述一种现象11、表达观点12、环境类表达总结13、文化教育类表达总结14、社会现象类表达总结15、现代科技类表达总结PartTwo：高分写作手法特训----模仿1、ItisundeniablethatshoppingontheInternethasbecomeanirresistibletrendinmodernsociety.2、AhostofindividualsdeemthatatestofspokenEnglishwilldomoregoodthanharm.3、ThenextsighttovisitistheMingTombs,whichisoneofthebest-preservedtombsfor13emperorsinMingDynastybuiltmorethanonethousandyearsago.4、althoughhonestyisbelievedtobeavirtue,therearestilldishonestpeopleinoursociety.

15、Itiswidelyaccepted,indeed,thattheyhavegainedincreasingpopularityamongpeopleinallwalksoflife.PartThree：经典范文精读精讲-------学以致用（input-----output）FoodSafetyOverthepastcoupleofyears,severalcasesofthefoodscandalhavebeendisclosedonvariousmedia.Theproblemoffoodsecurityhasbecomeahotbuttonacrosssociety.Theprevalenceoffoodinsecurityhasgreatlyimpactedpublichealth,whichthegovernmentcouldnotaffordtoignore,accordingtotheonlineeditionofthePeopleDaily.Thereareacoupleofdrivingforces,Iwouldargue,behindthisundesirabletide.First,inthecourseoftherapideconomicevolution,weignoremoraleducation,givingrisetotherisingrateoftheproblem.Moreimportantly,thelackofadequateregulationandpunishmentonthoseillegalproducersenforcesthetrend.AsConfuciusinstructed,itisbetterlatethannever.Promptandstrictmeasuresshouldbetakentoturnbackthiseviltrend.Thegovernmentshouldlaunchamassivemoralcampaigntoeducateallcitizensanddrawuptougherlawstocrackdownonthoseirresponsiblecorporationsandprohibitthemfromenteringthefoodindustryagain.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatthroughourcombinedeffortsweareboundtoenjoymorerisk-freefoodsinthedaysahead.UncivilizedBehaviorsWecannotfailtonoticethatcountlessuncivilizedbehaviorsexistinourdailylives,suchasspitting,talkingloudly,littering,sayingnastywordsinpublicplacesandsoforth.Allthesearebadmannersthatweshouldnotlosesightof.Asanancientlandenjoyingasplendidcivilizationspanningover5,000years,ChinaiswitnessingasurgeinimproperactsthateveryChinesecitizenshouldfeelashamedof.UncivilizedbehaviorsbyahostofChinesebothathomeandabroadhaveseriouslyaffectedChina’simage,accordingtoaneditorialpostedonPeopleDaily’sofficialwebsite.AsChinese,weshouldnotgetoffendedwhenotherspointoutourweaknessesbutshouldfocusmoreattentiononimprovingourselves.Weshouldstrivetoidentifythecausesofthoseimproperbehaviorsandfindwaystoeliminatethem.Thereareahostofcauses,Iwouldargue,behindthistrend.Tonameonlyone:thelackofmoraleducation.Thegovernmentshouldwageamassivemoralcampaigntofightagainstthistrendandweourselvesshouldendeavortobehavedecentlyinourdailylives.Ascollegestudentsofthenewage,weshouldtaketheleadingrole.DigitalAgeAsscientifictechnologybecomesincreasinglymature,ahostofdigitalproductshavebeenincorporatedintoourday-to-daylife,steeringourwayoflifeontoabrand-newpath.Amongvariousdigitalizeditems,cellphones,laptopcomputersandthelikearethosethatwearefamiliarwith.Itisbeyondquestionthatelectronicgadgets,likeeverythinginthisworld,emergewrappedwithbrightanddarksides.Ononehand,digitaldeviceshavehugelybetteredourlifeinmanyfronts.Takeaconcreteexample.Withthehelpofcomputers,wecanacquireawealthofusefulmaterials,enormouslyfacilitatingourstudies,a

2scenariounimaginableinthepre-Internetdays.Ontheotherhand,theyalsoyieldadverseimpacts.Agrowingnumberofyoungadultsarehookedononlinegames,feedingnegativelyintotheiracademicperformance.Asweepingdigitalrevolutioniswellunderway,anirresistibletrendwhichissupposedtobereckonedwith.Frommyownperspective,thebenefitsofdigitalstuffoutweightheirinadequacies.Wearesupposedtomakefulluseofittoserveourmultiplepurposesandstrivetominimizeitsunfavorableimpactsonus.Toputitsimply,Ifirmlybelievethatifhandledproperly,weareboundtoprofitimmenselyfromdigitalproducts.★★★第三部分：实战演练类型1：现象解释类【典例1】2011年6月四级OnlineShopping1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3．我的建议GiantleapsoftheInternetindustryhavesetthestageforthemushroomingofonlineshopping,whichisgaininggrowingpopularityforthepastyearortwo.AccordingtoonerecentsurveyconductedbySinaWeibo,animmenselypopularmicrobloggingserviceintheMiddleKingdom,closeto90percentofrespondentshaveoncedonewebshopping.Undoubtedly,virtualshoppingcutsbothways.Tobemoreconcrete,Internetshoppingenjoysahostofbenefits.Tonameonlyone:thepricesofthecommoditiesandservicesyoudesiretopurchasearetypicallylowerinonlineshopsthanthatinphysicalones.ForallthevariousstrengthsofInternet-basedshopping,thedarksidesofitalsoexist,however.Takeaconcreteexample.Atinyminorityofmerchantswithevilmotivesusethefalseinformationtotrickpeopleintopartingwithcreditcardsandotherimportantpersonaldetails,whichcostconsumersdear.Frommyownperspective,therewardsofInternet-basedshoppingoutweighitsrisks.Simplystated,wearesupposedtomakefulluseofitsvirtuestoserveourpurposesanddoallinourpowertominimizeitsadverseimpactsonusmeanwhile.

3【典例2】2011.06六级真题CertificateCraze范文：CertificateCrazeCurrently,itisfairlycommonplacetohearnewsaboutgrowinginterestinsittingforvariouscertificatetestsamongpeopleatalllevels.Indeed,obtainingaglitteringarrayofcertificationshasemergedasagoldenrush.AccordingtoonerecentreportconductedbySinaWeibo,oneofChina'sleadingTwitter-likeservices,upto70percentofrespondentsarekeenonacquiringcertificates.People'sintentionsaresharplydifferentwhenstrivingtogetcertificates.Asfarasthecollegestudentsareconcerned,awealthofgraduates-to-bearguethatawidevarietyofcertifications,especiallythosehighlyrecognizedonesbythewholesociety,willenormouslysharpentheircompetitiveedgecomparedwiththeirpeersinthetalentmarket.Fromtheperspectiveofwhite-collaremployees,manyprofessionalcertificateswillweighheavilyagainstthechancesofgettingpromoted.Toputitinanotherway,certificationsareplayinganincreasinglyprominentpartwhenmovinguptherigidsocialladder.Admittedly,whetherasimplecertificatecantrulyreflectone'srealcapabilitiesiswidelyquestionable.Simplystated,weshouldkeepaclearheadwhenitcomestothecertificatecraze.Mostimportantly,inmyeyes,doingallinourpowertohonetheabilitiesandskillsoughttobehighonouragenda.Onlybydoingsocanwestandamuchbetterchanceofstayingaheadinthisbrutallycompetitivesociety.类型2：现象+观点论证类Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofMyViewonUniversityRanking.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.目前高校排名相当盛行2.对于这种做法，人们看法不一3.我认为……MyViewonUniversityRanking_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyViewonUniversityRankingForthepastyearortwo,collegerankinghasbecomeimmenselyprevalentacrosstheChineselandscape.Abewilderingarrayofuniversityrankingfrequentlyemergeinvariousmedia,rangingfromnewspaperstomagazinestoeducationalsites.Itisnoexaggerationtosaythatcollegerankinghasgainedconsiderablepublicconcerncurrently.Thistopicisonthelipsofeveryone,buttheirviewsarefarfrombeingequal.Ahostofindividualssupportiveofuniversityrankingarguethatitcanfunctionasaneffectivechannelthroughwhichlow-rankinguniversitiesareabletobewellawareofthegapbetweenthemandfirst-classones.Inthiscase,thosemiddleorlow-rankinginstitutionswillstrivetoprogressuptherankingandtheoverallacademiclevelisboundtobeenhanced.Plus,manycollege-students-would-bearecapableofacquiringmoreusefulinformationabouttheirdesiredschools.However,otherpeopletakingadimviewofuniversityrankingdeemthatrestrictedbyawealthofconditions,manycollegerankingsarenotobjectiveandevenpositivelymisleading.Additionally,ahandfulof

4schoolswithevilintentionsfabricatecollegerankingineffortstolurehighschoolgraduates.Tomywayofthinking,weshouldnotoverratethiskindofrankingbecauseitcannotserveasthesolecriteriontoappraiseacertaincampus.Asfarasthecollegesanduniversitiesareconcerned,theyaresupposedtoputboostingcomprehensivecapabilitiesatthetopoftheagenda,say,academicfruitsandteachingequipmentsandfaculty.Onlybydoingsocanwebuildfirst-rateduniversitiesprogressively.类型:3：引言类Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheWaytoSuccessbycommentingonAbrahamLincoln'sfamousremark,"Givemesixhourstochopdownatree,andIwillspendthefirstfourhourssharpeningtheaxe."Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.TheWaytoSuccess_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】TheWaytoSuccessToparaphrasetheUSformerpresidentAbrahamLincoln,ahouseholdnameacrossthewholeplanet,"IwilldevotethefirstfourhourstohoningtheaxeifIamassignedatasktocutdownatreewithinsixhours."Thisprominentcomment,inmyeyes,oughttotriggerroundsofsoul-searchingoverthelong-standingissueonthewaytosuccess.Undoubtedly,eachindividualaspirestotastesuccessintheirlife.Asamatteroffact,wewillencounterawealthoftop-performersaswellaslow-achievers.Whatisthefundamentaldifferencebetweenthem?Diggingintothisphenomenon,wemayidentifythatthosehigh-achievershavemadeadequatepreparationsbeforeembarkinguponnewtasks.TakeSteveJobs,agreatinnovatorwhocameupwithastringofproductshavingimmeasurablytransformedourlife.Wemustbeacutelyawarethathehasdedicatedaconsiderableamountoftimeandefforttopreparingforthelaunchofnewitems.Therefore,thepastdecadehaswitnessedhisunprecedentedsuccessthatnooneelsecanrival.Frommyownperspective,inanefforttogetahead,settingawell-definedobjectiveisofcrucialsignificance.Moreimportantly,however,wearesupposedtogearupforitsufficiently,bothpsychologicallyandphysically,whichcanhelpusachieveourdesiredsuccesssmoothly.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayaboutacampusactivitythathasbenefitedyoumost.Youshouldstatethereasonsandwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.(2014年12月四级真题)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthefollowingquestion.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

5Supposeaforeignfriendofyoursiscomingtovisityourcampus,whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/hertoseeandwhy?（2014年6月四级真题）类型4：图画图表类Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheImpactoftheInternetonInterpersonalCommunication.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.TheImpactoftheInternetonInterpersonalCommunication_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】TheImpactoftheInternetonInterpersonalCommunicationTheadventoftheInternetushersinaneweraofinterpersonalcommunication.Thepicturefeaturesacompellingscene:alovelylittlegirltellsherfatherthathecangainaglimpseofwhathashappenedatschooltodaythroughherweblog.Alongwiththeemergenceofthewebandahostofpost-Internetproductssuchasblogs,wearesupposedtopondertheimpactstheyyieldoninterpersonalcommunication.Fewifanywoulddenythismosttransformativeinventionofthe20thcenturyhashugelyboostedinterpersonalinteraction.Tonameonlyone:thankstotheInternet,wenowcankeepintouchwitheachotherthroughdeliveringemailsorsendingtextmessagesinsteadofpostinglengthylettersintheolddays,enormouslyenhancingtheefficiencyandcementingtheintimatetiesamongpeople.However,weshouldnotturnablindeyetotheadverseeffects.Currently,growingnumbersoffolksgethookedonthewebandultimatelybecomesociallyisolated.PoorsociallifeandfeelingoflonelinessarenotuncommonforawealthofheavyInternetusers.Admittedly,thenethasfedimmenselyintointerpersonalcommunication,bothpositivelyandnegatively.Simplystated,whatreallyneedstooccuristomakefulluseofthisextremelypowerfultooltopromoteinterpersonalcommunicationandstrivetoreducetheunfavorableinfluencesonusmeanwhile.AndIfirmlybelievethatdesirableinterpersonalrelationshipisexceedinglyrewardingfortheon-goingdrivetobuildahighlycivilizedandmoreharmonioussociety.2012年12月四级作文Educationpays

6Arecentinvestigationshowstheweeklyearningsofpeoplewithdifferentlevelsofeducation.Graduateswithadoctoraldegreereceivethehighestweeklywage,whichis$1551,followedbytheoneswithmaster’sandbachelor’sdegrees,whoseweeklyearningsare$1272and$1038.Ontheotherhand,graduateswithnocollegedegree,orwithhighschooldiplomaorwithlessthanhighschooldiplomaearn$712,$626and$444perweekrespectively.Aswecansee,graduateswithhigherdegreesusuallyreceivehigherweeklypay.Thereareseveralfactorscontributingtothisphenomenon.Firstly,graduateswithhigherdegreeshaveacquiredmoreknowledgeandskillssothattheycandealwithtoughtasks.What’smore,thosepeoplearebetterinresolvingdifficultproblems.Asaresult,theyaremorelikelytobeemployedbymajorcompanieswhencompetingwiththeirpeers.Nowadays,oursocietyismoreandmoreinneedofpeoplewithrichknowledgeandstrongability.Whileitcostsalottogethigherdegrees,educationisevidentlyaworthyinvestment.

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