英语六级写作三个套路及写作模板、优秀范文

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英语六级写作三个套路及写作模板、优秀范文作文的展开—按照三步走：　　1)题目涉及的现象进行简单的描述，在描述的过程中将写作引向文章的主题(这样的描述可以自己控制，如果第一段落字数单薄，可以适当使描述具体化)。　　2)在第一步的基础上给出观点，观点视文章主旨可以分为：个人观点(包括方法、途径)，和多方观点(观点从正反两方面或者一个方面的多个层次阐述；在交待观点是需要有原因和支持)。　　3)个人观点总结点题(同意异表)，简要指出方法途径，如果找不到具体的解决方法，则将话讲得圆滑(如果正文中间观点没有必然冲突，则可以融合)。　例子：　A1995.1myviewonthenegativeeffectsofsomeadvertisements　　社会上的广告现象越来越多，很多的广告对我们的社会有不良的影响-〉(广告如何多：路边大型广告，报纸一半是广告，电线杆上垃圾广告，电视商业广告频繁。)　　Todayweliveinaworldofadvertisement.Adsappearonbroadsideboards,takeupmuchofnewspapercoverage,sliptheirwayontowallsandconstantlyinterruptTVprograms.Howeverpervasivetheyare,(尽管他们四处充斥)theyalwaysproduceanegativeinfluence。　　从观点的多个层次描写：1.白日抢劫——卖家通过弯曲夸大事实来欺骗消费者购买(化妆品)；2.种下不良消费习惯或者价值观(香烟)；3.污染环境(牛皮癣和校园商业海报)。　　Tobeginwith,daylightrobberyismadeeverydayoccurrence(白日抢劫每天都在发生)asaresultofthenegativeeffectsofads.Harmfuladsexaggeratethefunctionsanddistort/ignorethefacts。(夸大功能，歪曲事实)Everymeansistriedtohookpeopleintobuying(为了诱导人们消费，不择手段).Make-uppromotionisatypicalcaseinpoint。(化妆品促销就是一个典型的例子)Furthermore,misleadingadsplantinthemind(在脑海中植下)ofconsumers,especiallyyoungpeople,abadconsumptionhabitor,evenworse,corruptvalues.Forproof,looknofurtherthancigaretteselling.(香烟销售就是一个典型的例子)Adswiththeimageofasmokingpopstarbroadcastanirresistiblemessage。(传递无法抗拒的信息)Lastbutnotleast,easily-printedpostersandhandoutshavepollutedourenvironment。　　个人认为广告负面效应不可避免，要通过严格的法律来减少危害，同时开动脑精，远离它们。　　Personally,noonecanavoidthenegativeinfluence.However,weneedtostepuplawenforcement(加强执法)tominimizetheharmofsuchads.Meanwhile,asconsumers,weneedtouseourheadandkeepourdistance。　　B1996.1Two-dayweekend　　--〉工作效率提高，物质生活富足，人们可能享受2天周末制，—〉(除了工作效率之外：人们对生活水平的期待。)　　Astheproductivityimproves,oursocietybecomesmoreaffluentthaneverbefore.Asaresultofsuchsocialadvance,a2-dayweekendseemsnotjustpossiblebutalsofeasible。从正反两方面描写，每个方面可以从多个角度来论述：1.

1有人欢呼，原因如下：1)更长的休息时间，更好的调整精力，更高的效率为新的一周做好准备；2)更长的时间与家人分享，更加融洽家庭关系；3)可以进行适当距离的旅游，更好的享受生活。2.有人反对，原因如下：1)在某种程度上不利于生产和生活(减少产出，办事不方便)；2)降低效率(周末未完之事必须拖拉两天；周末活动过多造成假期疲劳)。　　Theproponents(支持者)happilywelcomea2-dayweekendforthefollowingreasons.Firstly,a2-dayweekendensuresmoretimeforrest(确保足够的时间休息).Peoplecanbetterrecoverfrom5dayshardwork(可以更好的从天的工作中恢复过来)andgetmorerefreshedandproductiveforthecomingweek.Secondly,a2-dayweekendallowsmoretimetosharewithone’sfamily.Thirdly,2daysmakepossible(使—成为可能)short-distancetravels,sothatpeopleneedn’trushthroughadestination(在一个游玩的目的地走马观花)andcanenjoymoreoflife(更好的享受生活).Ontheotherhand,theopponents(反对者)argueanextendedweekend(延长了的周末)causesincontinencesofsomekind(某种程度的不便)tolifeandharmtoeconomy,asworkersinserviceagencies(服务行业)andincompaniesleavepositionforleisureandrecreation。(离职去娱乐享受)What’smore,alongerweekendreducesefficiency(降低效率)anddoesnotnecessarilypromise(确保)moreenergyforanewweek.AnythingthathappensonFridaybutcan’tbefinishedwithinthatdayhastobedelayedevenlonger.Afterpeoplefinishanambitioustravel,theyfeelexhaustedthanrefueled.(他们感到很疲劳而不是充电了)　　个人认为是好事，但是要多方面努力，享受好处的同时尽量避免坏处。　　Asforme,Ireadilywelcomethe2-dayweekend.Still,weneedtomakejointeffortstominimizethedisadvantageswhileenjoyingahappierlife。C1998.6doluckynumbersreallybringluck？　　--〉中国这个社会长期以来的传统：喜欢吉祥的数字。数字和运气之间有必然的联系么？--〉(如何喜欢：重要事件选择黄道吉日，如婚庆，开业；手机号码选择吉祥数字等等举不胜举。)　　It’satraditionintheChineseculturetoassociateluckynumberswithgoodluck.Weselectgooddaysforbigeventslikeweddingandbusinessceremonies;wecasthugemoneyforagoodphonenumberoracarplate.Similarexamplessimplyaboundinthiscountry(这样的例子举不胜举).However,doesthismagicalrelationshipexist?　　从正反两方面描写，每个方面可以从多个角度来论述：1.有人坚信，原因如下：1)几千年的民族传统肯定有他的道理；2)偶尔的神奇现象也能增加信心。2。不相信的人也有自己的理由：1)数字只是人类发明的符号，与运气无关。2)如果不遵守科学规律，任何数字都不能确保幸运(车祸)。　　Thosewhobelievearguethatsuchatraditiondatesbackthousandsofyears(这个传统有几千年的历史了).Theremustbeareason.Inaddition,occasionalcoincidences(偶尔的巧合)inhistoryandinlifeevenaddtotheirconfidence(增强了他们对这个信心).Bycontrast,thosewhodon’tbelievealsohavetheirreasons.Foronething,numbersarenothingbutman-madesymbols.Howcantheyhaveanythingtodowithluck?Foranother,howeverluckythenumbersare(不管这个数字都么的吉祥)，accidentscan’tbeavoidedifweturnablindeyetoscience(无视科学)，say,drivingacarwhilebeingdrunk。　　个人认为数字和运气没有必然联系，因此不能当真。同时尊重这样的一个传统。Frommypointofview,thereisneveranyrelationbetweenluckynumbersandgoodluck.Whilewekeepthistradition,weshouldnevertakeittooseriously。

2英语六级写作模板大全第一部分、四六级作文：英文信函题型作文diy写作步骤要求考生根据提纲写一封英文书信，如2005年12月六级作文、2005年1月四六级作文、2004年6月四六级作文、2004年1月四级作文。对这类题型，通常分为5个步骤来写：　第一、文章开头：称呼　　第二段、寒暄语句，引出写信的目的：　　寒暄句+主题句(注：寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子)　　第三段、根据提纲扩展主体段落：　　主题句+扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句3　第四段、表明自己的观点，并结束书信主体段落　　在最后要他谈自己的看法　第五段、寒暄句+落款　　第二部分、英文信函题型作文diy写作范文练习　　[实战演练]　　directions：forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicalettertotheuniversitypresidentaboutthecanteenservicecampus.youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinebelow:　　假如你是李明，请你就本学校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应包括：食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，也可以是批评建议，也可以都有。　　[diy写作模板：架构阶段]　　第一段：称呼　　dearmr.president,　　第二段：引出写信的目的　　主题句：thislettercomestoyoufrom____.　　扩展句：init,someopinionsareputforwardforyoutoreflectupon　　第三段：对学校食堂正面的看法　　主题句：asyouknow,_____.butunfortunately,______.　　扩展句：1、___.(举例)asaresult,_____.　　2、besides,______.　　3、andwhat'smore,_____.　　第四段：对学校食堂负面的看法　　主题句：somepeoplemayarguethat____.

3　　扩展句：1、forinstance,____and____.　　2、butinmyopinon,______.　　第五段：结尾，表明自己看法　　结尾句：tobebelief,thoughabitdissatisfiedwith_____.　　扩展句：idobelievethat,withtheeffortsofallpeopleconcerned,wecansolvedtheproblemsthere.thanks.　liming　　[diy写作模板：填充阶段]　　第一段：称呼　　dearmr.president,　　第二段：引出写信的目的　　主题句：thislettercomestoyoufromoneofyourstudents.　　扩展句：init,someopinionsareputforwardforyoutoreflectupon　　第三段：对学校食堂的看法　　主题句：asyouknow,ourstudentsarethemaincustomersoftheuniversitycanteen.butunfortunately,wedon'tfindtheservicetheresatisfyingsometimes.　　扩展句：　　1、thefoodisnotasnutritiousasitshouldbe.(举例)asaresult,someofusbecomethinnerandweakeratuniversity.　　2、besides,sometimesthecanteenpeoplejustbringussteamedbreadwiththeirdirtybarehands.　　3、andwhat'smore,thefareisalsoalittlehigheratuniversity.　　第四段：别人对食堂看法　　主题句：somepeoplemayarguethatmeasureshavebeentakenandthingsareimprovingthere.　　扩展句：1、forinstance,iccardshavetakentheplaceofmoneyinthecanteed,andtheattitudeoftheservicepeopleisalsochanging.　　2、butinmyopinon,progressisnotsoquickandthorough.　　第五段：结尾，表明自己看法　　结尾句：tobebelief,thoughabitdissatisfiedwiththepresentcanteenconditions,　　扩展句：idobelievethat,withtheeffortsofallpeopleconcerned,wecansolvedtheproblemsthere.thanks.　　第三部分、范文

4　　DearMr.president,Thislettercomestoyoufromoneofyourstudents.init,someopinionsareputforwardforyoutoreflectupon.Asyouknow,ourstudentsarethemaincustomersoftheuniversitycanteen.butunfortunately,wedon'tfindtheservicetheresatisfyingsometimes.thefoodisnotasnutritiousasitshouldbe.asaresult,someofusbecomethinnerandweakeratuniversity.besides,sometimesthecanteenpeoplejustbringussteamedbreadwiththeirdirtybarehands.andwhat'smore,thefareisalsoalittlehigheratuniversity.Somepeoplemayarguethatmeasureshavebeentakenandthingsareimprovingthere.forinstance,iccardshavetakentheplaceofmoneyinthecanteed,andtheattitudeoftheservicepeopleisalsochanging.butinmyopinon,progressisnotsoquickandthorough.大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导关于如何看待大学生上网的英语作文InternetSurfing-因特网冲浪　　Nowadays,thereisagrowingpopularityofInternetsurfingoncollegecampus.Anincreasingnumberofstudents,majoringeitherinscienceorengineeringorinliberalarts,spendmanyhourssurfingtheInternetwithkeeninteresteveryday.　　InternetsurfinghasattractedcollegestudentslikemagnetsbecauseitistheworldofInternetandtheworldofglobalization.First,withtheglobalcoverageofInternet,wecanreachoutandtouchanyoneatanyplaceoftheworld.ViaInternet,wecansendandreceiveE-mailsatanytimemuchfaster,cheaperandmoreeffectivethanconventionalmeanssuchastelephone,telexandfax.Next,viaaccesstothehomepagesoflibraries,universities,journalsandnewsagencies,andresearchorganizations,wecaneasilyacquireallkindsofinformation,toknowwhatisgoingonallovertheworld.Finally,byclickingthemouse,wearecapableofdoingsuchimportantthingsasshopping,findingjobs,makingfriends,down-loadingfilesandprograms,doingbusiness,publishingpapersandfreelyairingouropinionsonallsortsofinterestingissues.Whatismore,Internetoffhrsmanyopportunities.Forexample,wecanwork,educateourselvesandcommunicatewithothersathomeviaInternet.IntheInformationAge,itisdifficuhtoimaginemodernlifewithoutInternet.WiththerapiddevelopmentofInformationTechnologyindustry,successfuldot-comcompaniesmushroomedeverywhere.Internetisrevolutionizingoureconomy,oursocietyandourlife.关于大学生压力的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowShouldCollegeStudentsRelievePressure?Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力　

5　　2)大学生缓解压力的方式有…　　3)你一般都是如何排解压力的?　　HowShouldCollegeStudentsRelievePressure?　　___________________________________________________________　　___________________________________________________________　　___________________________________________________________　　关于大学生压力的英语作文-行文思路　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。　　关于大学生压力的英语作文-高分范文　　HowShouldCollegeStudentsRelievePressure?　　Today’scollegestudentsfacemanypressures,mainlyfromparents’expectation,study,economy,employmentandallkindsofcompetition.[1]Althoughpressuretosomeextentcanprovidemotivation,overduepressurehasaseriousnegativeeffect.Pressurecandestroyastudent’sconfidence.[2]Moreseriously,itmightmakesomestudentslosecontroloftheiremotionsandbehaviors.　　[3]Consideringthegreatdamageofoverduepressure,collegestudentsshouldlearntohowtorelievepressure.[2]First,weshouldhavearightevaluationofourselves[4]soasto[5]makeuseofadvantagesandavoiddisadvantages.[2]Second,weshould[6]setaclearaimofastruggle.Theaimcangiveusmotivation,andmakeusbecomeactive.[2]Third,[7]attendingcollectiveactivitiesisaneffectivewaytorelievepressure.[2]Finally,ifyoufindpressureisnearly[8]beyondyourcontrol,you’dbetterturntoprofessionalpsychologicalguidance.　　[2]Astome,mypressureismainlyfromfutureemployment.[4]Inordertoreduceit,Iaskedmyparentshelpmeanalysemyadvantagesanddisadvantages,andproduceamorepracticaljobobjection.[2]Somyemploymentpressurewasrelievedgreatly.NowIbecomeconfidentinmyfuture,andI[9]dobelieveIcangetanidealjobaftermygraduation.　　【亮点点评】　　[1]although引导让步状语从句。　　[2]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。　　[3]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。　　[4]表示目的。　　[5]“扬长避短”。　　[6]“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。　　[7]动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。　　[8]“超出…范围或能力”。　　[9]强调动词believe。　　佳句临摹　　1.佳句：Althoughpressuretosomeextentcanprovidemotivation,overduepressurehasaseriousnegativeeffect.　　临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。　　___________________________________________________________　　2.佳句：Attendingcollectiveactivitiesisaneffectivewaytorelieve

6　　临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。　　___________________________________________________________　　3.佳句：Inordertoreduceit,Iaskedmyparentshelpmeanalysemyadvantagesanddisadvantages　　临摹：为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。　　___________________________________________________________　　【KEY】　　1.Althoughapart-timejobdoesmuchgoodtous,weshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeonit.　　2.Learninghowtodealwithpeopleisthefirstandthemostimportantsteptoenterintothesociety.　　3.Inordertogettheirpriorityinthefiercecompetition,collegestudentshavetodeveloptheirabilities关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCreditCardsonCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡　　2)分析产生该现象的原因　　3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议　　CreditCardsonCampus　　_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-行文思路　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。　　关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-高分范文　　CreditCardsonCampus　　Inrecentyears,creditcardshave[1]gainedmorepopularityamongcollegestudents.[2]Withbanks’morefocusoncollegemarket,[3]anincreasingnumberofcollegestudentshaveappliedforacreditcardandbeguntoconsumebyit.　　[4]Thefollowingthreefactorscanaccountforthepopularityofcreditcardsincollege.[5]Firstly,acreditcardprovidesoverdrawingservice,[6]whichis[7]abigattractionforthosestudentswhohavenomuchmoneyfortheirdomination.[5]Secondly,acreditcardcanhelpreleasefinancialburdensonthosepoorstudents,and[8]hencereducetheriskoftheirdroppingschoolforlackingmoney.[5]Besides,manybanksmakesomepreferentialpoliciesoncreditcards,likesendingagift,loweringyearcost.[7]Drawnbythesepolicies,manycollegestudentsapplyforcreditcards.　　[5]AsfarasIamconcerned,itisnotabadthingforcollegestudentstoowncreditcards.[5]However,thereismisuseofcreditcardsamongcollegestudents.Manystudentsusecreditcardstobuyluxuriousthingstheydon’tneedreally,andevensomeofthemoweabigcreditcardsdebt.[5]Therefore,schoolsandbankshaveresponsibilitytoletcollegestudentslearnhowto

7usecreditcardsproperly.[9]Onlyinthiswaycancollegestudentsenjoyreallytheadvantagesofcreditcards.　　关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文【亮点点评】　　[1]“越来越流行”。　　[2]“随着”，介词。　　[3]“越来越多的”。　　[4]用于引出原因。　　[5]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。　　[6]which引导非限制性定语从句。　　[7]表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式，用词富于变化。　　[8]“由此，因此”。　　[9]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。　　关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-佳句临摹　　1.佳句：Withbanks’morefocusoncollegemarket,anincreasingnumberofcollegestudentshaveappliedforacreditcard.　　临摹：随着市场经济的快速发展，金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。　　___________________________________________________________　　2.佳句：Acreditcardcanhelpthosepoorstudentspaytheirtuitionandfees,andhencereducetheriskoftheirdroppingschool.　　临摹：一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力，并由此来增加就业机会。　　3.佳句：Drawedbythesepolicies,manycollegestudentsapplyforcreditcards.　　临摹：在就业压力的迫使下，一些大学生开始自主创业。　　___________________________________________________________　　【KEY】　　1.Withtherapiddevelopmentofmarketeconomy,moneyplaysamoreandmoreimportantroleinthesociety.　　2.Somestudentshopetoenhancetheirpracticalabilitiesbyattendingsocialpractice,andhenceincreasetheirchancesofemployment.　　3.Forcedbyemploymentpressure,somecollegegraduatesbegintosetuptheirownbusinesses.(关于勤俭节约的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicIsThriftStillaGoodVirtue?Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为勤俭节约的生活方式已经过时了　　2)但是很多人反对这种说法　　3)你的看法是…，为什么?　　IsThriftStillaGoodVirtue?　　_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　关于勤俭节约的英语作文-行文思路　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

8　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由;提出第2种观点：勤俭节约仍然是一种美德，并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法，并说明理由。　　关于勤俭节约的英语作文-高分范文　　IsThriftStillaGoodVirtue?　　Withtheimprovementofthelivingstandards,manypeopleare[1]nolongerinterestedinthesimplelifestyle[2]andsomeofthemevenfeelashamedtobethrifty.Whattheypursueisthelatestfashion.Intheireyes,thriftisalreadyoutofstyle.　　[3]However,stillotherpeopleinsistthatthriftisagoodvirtue.Theysaythattheunprecedentedpowerofproductiondoesn’tmeanthatweareentitledtoalifeofextravagance,becauseournaturalresourcesarelimited[2]andsomeofthemevenare[4]onthedecline.[5]Moreover,theyholdthatwastemayleadtodegradationofsocialatmosphereandenvironmentalpollutionaswell.　　[6]Astome,Ipreferthelatteropinion.Ibelieve[7]“Wastenot,wantnot.”Thetruthofthissayingis[8]nottogiveupcomfortbuttoenhanceefficiency.[5]Infact,economicgrowthdependsenormouslyonsaving.[5]Besides,therearestillmillionsofChinese[9]livingunderpovertyline.Wecanneveraffordrecklesswaste.[5]Therefore,[10]itisnodoubtthatthriftisstillagoodvirtuethatweshouldnotgiveup.　　关于勤俭节约的英语作文【亮点点评】　　[1]“不再”。　　[2]表示递进。　　[3]引出另外一种观点。　　[4]“在下降”。　　[5]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。　　[6]用于引出自己的观点或选择。　　[7]引用谚语“俭以防匮”。　　[8]not...but连接并列结构，意为“不是…而是”。　　[9]现在分词短语作后置定语。　　[10]“毫无疑问”。　　关于勤俭节约的英语作文-佳句临摹　　1.佳句：Ournaturalresourcesarelimitedandsomeofthemevenareonthedecline.　　临摹：车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失，甚至还夺走了无数人的生命。　　___________________________________________________________　　2.佳句：Thetruthofthissayingisnottogiveupcomfortbuttoenhanceefficiency.　　临摹：我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力，而应该相信一句谚语：“有志者，事竟成。”　　___________________________________________________________　　【KEY】　　1.Trafficaccidentshavecausedgreatdamagestopeople’spropertiesandeventakenawaythousandsofpeople’slives.　　2.Weshouldneverunderestimateourabilitiesbutshouldbelieveintheproverb:“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”关于节食减肥的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnDieting.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

9　　1)现在有越来越多人的选择节食减肥，有的人是为了健康，但是更多的人是为了有一个苗条的身材　　2)分析节食减肥可能带来的影响　　3)你的建议　　OnDieting　　_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　关于节食减肥的英语作文-行文思路　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响，提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因;阐述节食不当可能带来的影响;针对节食给出“我”的建议。　　关于节食减肥的英语作文-高分范文　　OnDieting　　Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplearebeginningtogoonadiet.Somepeopleareconcernedwiththeirhealth,andtheygoonadietinordertoloseunwantedweight.Butstillothers,[1]especiallytheyoungwomen,arepayingtoomuchattentiontotheiroutwardappearance.They[2]becometheleadingnumberswhogoonadiet.　　[3]However,dietingmight[4]bringgreatnegativeeffectsonpeople.[3]Foronething,quitealotofpeopledon’treallyneeddietingtokeephealth,andtheydietjustbecausetheywanttokeepslim.Forthem,dieting[5]notonlyisuselessbutalsomightdamagetheirhealth.[3]Foranother,somepeoplelackenoughknowledgeonhowtodietscientifically.[3]Asaresult,theyarelikelytosufferfrommalnutrition.　　[6]Consideringtheseriousdamageofunhealthydieting,weshouldbecautiousindieting.[3]Inmyopinion,dieting,[7]forwhateverreasons,needsprofessionalguidance.[8]Onlywithrightguidancecandietingwork[9]asweexpect.　　关于节食减肥的英语作文-【亮点点评】　　[1]“尤其”，表示强调。　　[2]“成为主力军”。　　[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。　　[4]用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。　　[5]“notonly…butalso”用于连接并列成分。　　[6]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。　　[7]“不管因为什么原因”，whatever意为“无论什么”。　　[8]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。　　[9]“像我们期望的那样”。　　关于节食减肥的英语作文-佳句临摹　　1.佳句：Forthem,dietingnotonlyisuselessbutalsomightdamagetheirhealth.　　临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。　　___________________________________________________________　　2.佳句：Inmyopinion,dieting,forwhateverreasons,needsprofessionalguidance.　　临摹：无论你的目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。

10　　___________________________________________________________　　3.佳句：Onlywithrightguidancecandietingworkasweexpect.　　临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。　　___________________________________________________________　　【KEY】　　1.Genetictechnologyhelpsnotonlytheplantandanimalsbutalsohumanbeingstoliveahigherquality　　2.Whateveryouraimis,youmustworkedhonestlytoattainit.　　3.Onlywhenadequatecreditshavebeenachievedcanstudentsgainthequalificationforgraduation.关于交通事故的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicRoadAccidents.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)交通事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损失　　2)分析交通事故发生的主要原因　　3)如何降低交通事故发生率RoadAccidents_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　关于交通事故的英语作文-行文思路　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。　　关于交通事故的英语作文-高分范文　　RoadAccidents　　Roadaccidents,[1]asoneoftheimportantsocialproblems,havealwaysbeenpaidgreatconcern.Inmostofthebigcities,everyday,therehappenquiteafewroadaccidents.Intheseaccidents,manypeoplesuffergreatpropertylosses[2]andsomeofthemevenlosetheirlives.　　[3]Thefollowingreasonscontributetoroadaccidents.[4]Aboveall,trafficisbecomingheavierandheavier,especiallyinbigcities.Moreandmorevehiclesonroad[5]increasethechancesofaccidents.[4]Inaddition,manydriverslacksafetyawarenessandevendon’tcomplywiththetrafficregulations.Forexample,somedriversruntheredlightordriveafterbeingdrunk.[4]Besides,the[6]weaksupervisionandmanagementoftrafficcontrolsectorsisanoticeablereason.　　[7]Consideringtheseriousnessofthetrafficproblem,[8]itishightimeforustotakemoreeffectivemeasurestosolveit.[4]Firstly,thegovernmentshouldinvestmoremoneytoimprovepublictransportationandprovidemoretransportationwaysforpeopletochoose.[4]Secondly,stricterlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetopunishthosewhobreaktrafficregulations.[4]Finally,driversshouldenhancesafetyawarenessanddevelopgooddrivingmanners.[9]Onlyinthiswaycouldroadaccidentsbeavoidedsuccessfully.　　关于交通事故的英语作文【亮点点评】　　[1]插入语，as意为“作为”。

11　　[2]表递进。　　[3]用于引出原因。　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。　　[5]“增加了…的机会或可能性”。　　[6]“监管不力”，weak的使用准确地道。　　[7]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。　　[8]用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为“早该是…的时候了”。　　[9]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。　　关于交通事故的英语作文-佳句临摹　　1.佳句：Intheseaccidents,manypeoplesuffergreatpropertylossesandsomeofthemevenlosetheirlives.　　临摹：一些人失败后可能会变得灰心丧气，甚至会放弃成功的希望。　　___________________________________________________________　　2.佳句：Moreandmorevehiclesonroadincreasethechancesofaccidents.　　临摹：许多学生认为考取更多的证书可以增加他们找工作的机会。　　___________________________________________________________　　3.佳句：Itishightimeforustotakemoreeffectivemeasurestosolveit.　　临摹：因此，我们早该关注一下人口过剩问题了。　　___________________________________________________________　　【KEY】　　1.Somepeople,afterafailure,maybecomediscouragedandevengiveuptheirhopeforsuccess.　　2.Manystudentsbelievethatmorecertificatesmayincreasethechancesoftheirbeingemployed.　　3.Therefore,itishightimewepaidspecialattentiontotheproblemofoverpopulation.(关于大学生就业难的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCollegeStudents’JobHunting.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:　　1)近年来出现大学生就业难的现象　　2)产生这一现象的原因　　3)如何解决这一问题　　关于大学生就业难的英语作文【思路点拨】　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述应该如何解决这一问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出大学生就业难的现象，指出现象的表现；说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等；从几个方面提出解决方法。　　关于大学生就业难的英语作文【参考范文】　　CollegeStudents’JobHunting　　Nowadays,theemploymentofcollegestudentsisbecomingmoreandmoreofaproblem.Aboutadecadeago,universitystudentscouldfindsatisfactoryandenviablejobsaftergraduation,whilethethingsarequitedifferentatpresent.Inaddition,accordingtostatistics,about30%ofgraduatestudentscan’tfindajobbutstayathomeaftergraduation。　　Employmentdifficultyofcollegestudentsisduetothefollowingreasons.Amongthese,the

12increasingrecruitmentofcollegesanduniversitiesplaysavitalrole.Inaddition,manycollegesanduniversitiesfailtoadapttheircoursestothedevelopmentofeconomy。　　Consideringtheseriousnessofunemploymentofcollegestudents,Ithinkitishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestosolvetheproblem.Aboveall,collegestudentsshouldrealizetheirowndefectsandfurtherimprovethemselvestokeeptheircompetitiveedgeinsociety.Moreover,collegesoruniversitiesshouldprovidemoretrainingsandinternshipopportunitiesbeforethestudentsenterthesociety.Besides,collegestudentsshouldholdarightattitudetowardsjobsandsettheirjobexpectationsatasuitablelevel.Onlythroughthesewayscanthecollegestudentsfindasatisfactoryjobandhaveabrighterfuture。(关于大学生同居利与弊的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyViewonCollegeStudent’scohabitation.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)现在社会上的未婚同居现象相当普遍，大学生中也存在这种现象　　2)分析大学生同居的利与弊　　3)你怎样看待大学生同居现象？为什么？　　关于大学生同居利与弊的英语作文【思路点拨】　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象的利与弊，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生中的未婚同居现象，引出对其的争议；对比分析大学生同居的利与弊；表明“我”对大学生未婚同居现象的立场并说明理由。　　关于大学生同居利与弊的英语作文【参考范文】　　MyViewonCollegeStudents’Cohabitation　　Nowadays,premaritalcohabitationiscommonandpopularandthisphenomenonhasextendedtothecampus.Moreandmorecollegestudentloverschoosetolivetogetheroffcampus.Thisphenomenonhasarousedgreatpublicconcernandtherearemuchdiscussiononitsadvantagesanddisadvantages。　　Admittedly,collegestudents’cohabitationhasitsadvantages.Oneofthemisthattheloverscanknoweachotherbetterbylivingtogether.Theycandecidewhethertheirromanticrelationshipshouldgoon.Secondly,cohabitationmaturescollegestudentsandimprovestheirsenseofresponsibility.However,therearealsomanyproblemsresultingfromthecohabitationoncampus.Agoodexampletoillustratethispointisthatsomegirlsmightbehurtbytheirirresponsibleboyfriends.Besides,livingtogetherwillinvolvemanytrivialthings,whichofcoursewillinfluencetheirstudy。Frommypointofview,itisunwiseforcollegestudentloverstolivetogetherduringtheireducation.Afterall,premaritalcohabitationisnotaneasything,whichistooearlyforcollegestudentswhoarenotmatureenough.Therefore,Isuggestthatthecollegestudentsshouldtakeloveseriouslyanddonotchoosetolivetogetherbeforegraduation。关于电视选秀节目的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAttendingTVPKshowsdoes(ordoesnot)goodtoyoungpeople.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人　　2)为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，这种现象引起了许多关注

13　　3)你怎么看？为什么？　　关于电视选秀节目的英语作文【思路点拨】　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和第2点指出一种有争议的现象，提纲第3点要求表明“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述年轻人热衷选秀节目的现象，引出对其的争议；表明“我”对年轻人热衷选秀节目的看法，并说明“我”的理由。　　关于电视选秀节目的英语作文【参考范文】　　AttendingTVPKShowsDoesNoGoodtoYoungPeople　　NowadaysTVPKshowsaregreathitsinChinaandhaveattractedmanyyoungpeople.Someyoungstersevengiveuptheirstudiestoattendtheseshowsinthehopeofbecomingfamousovernight.Somepeoplethinktheseshowsprovideyoungpeoplemorechancetoshowtalents,whileothersbelievethatattendingtheseshowsdoesnogoodtotheyoungpeople.Asforme,Iprefertothelatteropinion。　　ItshouldbeadmittedthatsomeyoungpeoplelikeLiyuchunhasstoodoutfromthenumerousattendantsinthePKshow,butthatdoesn’tmeanattendingthePKshowsisagoodwaytobecomesuccessfulforyoungpeople.Thefollowingreasonscansupportmyview.Firstly,TVPKshowsbreedrestlessnessandinduceyoungpeopletohuntafterfameatwhatevercost.Secondly,TVPKshowscansubverttheyoungsters’values.TheythinkattendingthePKshowsisashortcuttothesuccess,sotheymaydespisethewayofachievingsuccessbyhardwork.Finally,iftheyoungpeoplefailintheseshows,theywillsufferapsychologicalunbalance。　　Inaword,enteringforTVPKshowsisnotagoodwayforyoungpeopletomakeasuccess.IsuggestyoungpeopleshouldthinktwicebeforedecidingtoattendPKshows。关于大学生自助游的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSelfhelpTravelingofCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)大学生出去旅行经常会选择“自助游”　　2)分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因　　3)你的看法　　关于大学生自助游的英语作文【思路点拨】　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：简单说明何谓“自助游”，描述大学生热衷于“自助游”的现象；分析大学生选择“自助游”主要原因；阐述“我”对“自助游”的看法。　　关于大学生自助游的英语作文【参考范文】　　Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents　　Socalledself-helptravelingrefersthattravelersthemselvesarrangetravelroute,traveltime,andalltheothermattersduringtravel,withoutanyguideandteamleader.Nowadaysthiskindoftravelingmodelisgainingmoreandmorepopularityamongcollegestudents.Accordingtothesurvey,over80%ofcollegestudentspreferself-helptravelingtofollowingatourgroup。　　Whyarecollegestudentssofondofself-helptraveling?Aboveall,self-helptravelinggivestravelersmorefreedomandspace.Collegestudentsdon’tlikebeingrestricted.Theywanttoarrangetheirtravelastheywish.Moreover,self-helptravelingprovidescollegestudentsagood

14chancetoimprovetheiradaptabilityandviability.Besides,theexpensesinself-helptravelingarecontrolledbytravelersthemselves.Itisagoodchoiceforthosecollegestudentswhohavenotmuchmoneyfortheirdisposal。　　Asacollegestudent,Ienjoyself-helptravelingverymuch,andIhavebenefitedalotfromit.Foronething,Ihaveappreciatedmanyamazingscenerythatthosetravelerswhofollowtourgroupscannot.Foranother,self-helptravelhelpsmelearnhowtodealwithpeoplebetter。关于网络犯罪的英语作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCyberCrimes.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前　　2)应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题　　3)作为大学生，你应该怎么做？　　关于网络犯罪的英语作文【思路点拨】　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状；指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法；从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。　　关于网络犯罪的英语作文【参考范文】　　CyberCrimes来源：考试大　　WiththepopularizationofInternet,cybercrimeshavebecomeaseriousproblemfacingus.NowadayscybercriminalsseemtobeeverywhereontheInternet.Toillustrate,somecommitfraudorliftintellectualproperty,otherssnatchpasswordsordisrupte-commerce,andstillothersunleashvirusestocrashcomputers.Asaresult,thesecrimesdestroynetworksecuritygreatlyandmakecomputeruserssuffergreatlosses。　　However,weshouldn’ttoleratethesecybercriminalsanymore.It’shightimeforustotakeeffectivemeasurestofightagainstcybercrimes.First,weshouldreinforcethecyberlawstopunishcybercriminalsstrictly.Moreover,weshoulddevelophightechniquesassoonaspossibletoimproveintrusiondetectionandpreventcybercrimes.Besides,moretalentedpeopleshouldbetrainedandmoreeffectivefirewallsshouldbebuiltupsoastomakethenetimmunetoallkindsofviruses。　　Ascollegestudents,wehaveresponsibilitytojointhebattleagainstcybercrimes.Foronething,weshouldnotuseothers’computersunlesswegetpermission.Foranother,weshouldbehonesttoothersontheInternetandnotreleaseorspreadunrealinformation.Inaword,ittakesourcommoneffortstodefeatcybercrimes。关于大学生心理健康的英语作文　　Howtoimprovestudent'smentalhealth　　1、大学生的心理健康十分重要　　2、因此，学校可以....。.　　3、我们自己应当....。.来源：考试大　　题目分析：

15　　学生的心理健康是近年来被热议的话题之一，属于经典的问题解决型，故不外乎采用举例子，作比较，分类别，列数字，打比方等方式讨论。　　参考范文：　　Students'mentalhealthhasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Indeed,itiswidelyacceptedthatithasgainedgrowingpopularityamongpersonsinallwalksoflife.Thereisageneraldiscussiontodayabouttheissueofdisorderinbrains。　　Obviously,itisnecessarythateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentopreventproblems.Authoritiesinuniversitiesplayacriticalroleinthesituation.Tobeginwith,schools,suchascollegesoruniversities,canprovidechancesfortheyoungmentoeasetheirattention.What'smore,somearephysicallystrong,butpsychologicalproblemsareabletobringpotentialthreats.Teachesmayhaveachancetofindtheminadvance.Besides,specialistsinthisfieldaretoberequiredtomakefullpreparationforcasesintime.Facingthecrisis,expertscandealwithitinaprofessionalway,whichmeanstheyhavemoreorbetteropportunitiestosaveusthanothers.(学校)　　Fromthefactorsmentionedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatwecanfreeourselvesfrommentalillnessbytakingcertainprecautions.Forexample,ifyouhavepainsorpuzzlesinmind,findingafriendtoexpresstheseisagoodwaytoreleasepressure.Certainly,thereislittledoubtthatfurtherattentionwillbepaidtotheissue。(我们)　　总结：　　potentialthreats潜在威胁　　ease减轻，舒缓　　psychologicalproblems心理问题　　precaution预防措施　　releasepressure释放压力　　playanimportant/criticalroleinsth　　itiswidelyacceptedthat……　　Tobeginwith,What'smore,Besides,　　Fromthefactorsmentionedabovedrawtheconclusionthat等等均为经典模板句式！1Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:TurnoffYourCellPhone.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1、手机给我们的生活带来了便利。2、但是手机铃声也会影响其他人。3、在某些场合请关掉你的手机。TurnoffYourCellPhoneWiththedevelopmentofinformationtechno1ogyandreducedpriceofcommunicationproducts,

16themobi1ephonehasbecomeanecessityformostpeople.Obviously,itshortensthedistancebetweenpeopleandmakesourlifemoreconvenient.Thankstothecellphone,it’seasyforustocontactorbecontactedbyothersanytimeandanywhere.Wewillnevermissanyimportantmeetings，greatdealsoradmirableopportunities.However，haveyounoticedsometimesthecellphonealsobringsembarrassmenttous?It’snotraretoseesomeonepressingthecellphonetohisearandshouting1oud1yinpublicasiftherewerenooneelsepresent.AndI’msureeachonehashadsuchanexperiencethatthecellphoneringcontinuous1yonaformaloccasion.Perhapsthesepeoplehavemany1ife-and-deathreasonstokeepthephoneworkingatalltimes,butitinterruptspeoplearoundthemwhohavetohearwhattheydon’tcarewhentheywanttoconcentrateonwhatthey’redoing.Soifyouareoneofthem,pleaseshutoffyourcellphoneinpublic,especiallyonaquietandseriousoccasion.It’sarespectforbothothersandyourself.2Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:ThePost-graduateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1、目前很多人报考研究生。2、我认为形成这股热潮的原因是……ThePost-graduateCrazeEachyear,millionsofcollegestudentswillsitinforthepost-graduateentranceexamination.Moreandmorestudentshaveregardedthepursuingofamasterdegreeasanindispensablepartoftheireducation.Whatistoaccountfortheirenthusiasmforapost-graduatediploma?First,itisthedemandofthetime.Inanageofknowledgeupdatingandinformationexplosion,whatyouhavelearnedincollegecanhardlymeetthedemandofsociety.Talentsofhighqualitywhoareequippedwiththelatestknowledgeandskillwillbeneededmorethanever.Thatiswhymanystudentswillfurthertheirstudies.Second,weallrecognizethatthemoreeducationyouhave,themorelikelyyouaretosucceed.Comparedwiththosewithoutamasterdegree,masterswillenjoymorepreferentialtreatment,forexample,bettersalaries,moreopportunitiesforpromotionandtraining.Apost-graduatedegreecanguaranteeamorepromisingcareer.Lastbutnotleast,withthegraduationofalargenumberofcollegestudents,competitionforjobsbecomesmoreandmorefierce.Onewaytogainsomeadvantageoverothersistohaveahigher

17degree.Nowondermillionsofstudentswillconsiderpursuingapost-graduatedegree.3Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:MyIdeaofPopMusic.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1、有人认为流行音乐不能登大雅之堂。2、有人认为音乐无高低贵贱之分，只有兴趣上的差别。3、我认为……MyIdeaofPopMusicPopmusicisheldIcontemptbymanypeople.Inthesepeople’seyespopmusicisalwaysinsharpcontrastto“loftymusic”.ThelatterreferstosymphoniesandoperasoftheEuropeancountries.Theyshowgreatconcernforthefactthatmanypeoplepreferpopmusictosymphonies,becauseforthempopmusicshouldbeexcludedfromtheholypalaceofmusic.Conversely,manypeoplehaveanorderforpopmusic.Theyarguethatpeoplewhowantustolistentosymphoniesareadvocatingakindof“eliteculture”.Thisnotionisunacceptabletopopmusicfans,fortheydon’tbelievethatsymphoniesareloftierthanpopmusic.Thedifferenceonlyliesintheinterestsofdifferentpeople.Itisunfairtospeakofpopmusicwithcontemptwhilespeakingofsymphonieswithawe.Inconclusion,myideaisthatjustasthereisnodistinctionbetweenhighcultureandlowculture,soitisinappropriatetosaypopmusicbelongstothe“lower”peoplewhereassymphoniesinahigher,loftierformofmusic.Afterall,therearemanybadly-composedsymphonies.Andwecan’texpecteverypieceofpopmusictobeexcellent.Popmusicreflectsthethoughtsandinterestsofacertainagegroupofageneration.Itistheproductofacertainage,butitalsohassomethinguniversal,somethingthatbelongstoallhumanbeings,thatunderliesitsgreatsuccessamongpeople.Inthissenseitisratherfoolishforsomepeopleofmediatoshowgreatconcernsimplybecausemanypeoplepreferpopmusic.Anywaypopmusichasbecomeanindispensablepartofthehumanfamily.中美教育差异对比TheDifferencesofEducationbetweenAmericaandChinaEducationisculture,anddifferenteducationsshowdifferentsocieties’culture.Americansregardeducationasthemeansbywhichtheinequalitiesamongindividualsaretobeerasedandbywhicheverydesirableendistobeachieved.WhileChineseeducationisforfoundationeducation,

18butstudentsmaybenotlearnmuch.Butallinall,differenteducationsystemsaccountforthedifferentphenomenon,becausedifferentsocietybackgroundsanddifferentculturehelpshumancreateadifferentcountryintheworld.Thedifferentsocietystructureplaysanimportantpartintheeducationsystem.InChina,allthosewhocanentertheUniversityhavereceivedaneliteeducationandbeforeenrollmenttheyhavedevotedthemselvestohardstudying.Therefore,theyaregoodatgettinghighmarksonmathematics,psychicsandsoon.However,theyarelackofchancestopracticeskillsinrealworldthushavingnosocialexperiences.Inthatcase,aftergraduation,moststudentsfinditdifficulttofindasatisfactoryjobthoughmanyofthemgetajobthroughtherelationshipnet.WhileinAmerica,theeducationsystempaysmoreattentiontosocialskillsthantomarks.Studentshavedevelopedtheabilitytobeindependenceinlifeandwork.Afteruniversity,theyshowgreatcapabilityofthinking,innovationandcreationwhichmakethemkeeppacewiththemodernworld.TheyarecompetentforthechallengingworkandcangainagoodjobinAmericawithease.ThereisahugegaponeducationbetweenAmericaandChina,butwecan’tsaywhichoneisrightorwrong,‘causeeachoftheeducationsystemisbasedonthedifferentbackgrounds,AmericaneducationshouldbefollowingtheAmerican’sculture,meanwhile,ChineseeducationhastofollowChineseculture.AgoodeducationmodelforChinaisveryimportanttothelearningprocess,andalsoisveryhard.ButthemostimportantthingweneedisthemoderneducationwhichisinternationalizationeducationsystemandlocalizationeducationsystemsuniteforChinaandAmerica,thisisalsowhattheeducationitselfneeds.大学占座现象Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicReservingaSeat.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　　1)很多大学里“占座”现象十分普遍　　2)这种现象会带来哪些影响　　3)你对此的看法　　ReservingaSeat　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象带来的影响，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生在教室和图书馆“占座”的现象;阐述这种现象带来的不良影响;谈谈“我”对“占座”现象的看法。　　高分范文　　ReservingaSeat　　Weoftenseethereisatable-cloth,abookorsomethingelseonthedeskintheclassroomorlibrary,[1]indicatingtheseatistaken.Thiskindofphenomenonisveryusualinalmostallcollegesanduniversities.[2]Strangelyenough,mostofstudentsseemto[3]takethisforgranted,andfewwillprotestit.　　[4]Thoughmostofstudents’takingseatsinadvanceisforthepurposeofbetterstudy,thiskindofphenomenonhasgreatnegativeeffects.[5]Ontheonehand,itisaselfishbehavior,which

19damagesotherstudents’interests.[6]Evenifmanystudentscometotheclassroomveryearly,theycannotfindaseat.[5]Ontheotherhand,reservingaseat[7]violatestheruleoffairness.[8]Nomatterhowlateyoucometoclass,theseatisstillreservedforyou[6]eventhoughmanyothersareeagerforthatseat.　　[9]Consideringtheabove-mentioned,Ithink,[10]itishightimethatwecollegestudentstookagoodlookofourbehavior.[5]Indeed,onlyifallofuscanimproveourconsciousness,itisnotadifficulttaskforustogetridofthiskindofphenomenon“reservingaseat”.　　【亮点点评】　　[1]“表示”，现在分词短语作伴随状语。　　[2]“非常奇怪的是”，副词使用恰当。　　[3]“认为…理所当然”。　　[4]though引导让步状语从句，引出对不良影响的阐述。　　[5]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。　　[6]evenif/eventhough引导让步状语从句。　　[7]“违背了公平原则”。　　[8]“nomatter+疑问词”表示“无论，不管”，引导让步状语从句。　　[9]用于得出结论。considering用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。　　[10]用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为“早该是…的时候了”。　　佳句临摹　　1.佳句：Evenifmanystudentscometotheclassroomveryearly,theycannotfindaseat.　　临摹：即使要花费更多的钱，父母仍然愿意送他们的独生子女去更好的学校。　　___________________________________________________________　　2.佳句：Nomatterhowlateyoucometoclass,theseatisstillreservedforyou.　　临摹：有了私家车，不管天气如何，也不管什么时候出门，人们都可以带孩子或父母去任何地方。　　___________________________________________________________　　3.佳句：　　Consideringtheabove-mentioned,Ithink,itishightimethatwecollegestudentstookagoodlookofourbehavior.　　临摹：鉴于以上所述，我认为，加强对大学生的心理辅导是当务之急。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　【KEY】　　1.Parentsarewillingtosendtheironlychildtobetterschoolsevenifitcostsmore.　　2.Withprivatecars,peoplecantaketheirchildrenorelderparentsanywhere,nomatterwhattheweatherislikeandnomatterwhentheygoout.　　3.Consideringtheabove-mentioned,Ithink,itishightimeforustostrengthenthepsychologicalinstructiononcollegestudents.你怎样看待考试Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheAttitudetowardsExamination.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)人们对待考试一直褒贬不一　　2)你怎样看待考试，为什么?

20　　3)提出你的建议　　　TheAttitudetowardsExamination___________________________________________________________　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个有争议的话题，提纲第2点要求谈谈“我”对其的态度，提纲第3点要求提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：通过大学考试引出人们对待考试的不同态度;表明“我”对考试的态度，并说明理由;针对考试提出“我”的建议。　　高分范文　　TheAttitudetowardsExamination　　[1]Therearealwaysmanyargumentsabouttheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofexamination.Somepeoplethinkexaminationistheonlybestwaytotesthowexamineeshavemasteredwhattheyhavestudied.[2]However,stillothersholdtheoppositeopinion.Theyarguethatexaminationcan’tmeasurehowthestudentshavereallystudied.Theysayitcando[3]nothingbutburdenthestudents.　　[4]Asforme,Ithinktheexaminationisveryusefultobothteachersandstudents.[4]Ontheonehand,examinationcanhelpteacherscheckhowmuchstudentshavelearnedaboutasubjectandthusknowwhatshouldbetheirteachingfocus.[4]Ontheotherhand,[5]asfarasstudentsareconcerned,byexamination,theycan[6]notonlyknowhowtheyhavestudied[6]butalsofindoutwhattheyhaven’tmasteredwell.[4]Thus,theycouldimprovetheirstudyingmethodsoastomakegreaterprogress.　　[4]Ofcourse,examinationisnottheonlywaytomeasureone’sability.[4]Also,toomanyexaminationsareaburdenonbothteachersandstudents.[4]But,insum,theexamination[7]doesmoregoodthanharm.Therefore,Ithinkthecorrectattitudetowardsexaminationshouldbeto[8]takefulladvantageofitandavoiditsdisadvantage.　　【亮点点评】　　[1]用于表示某事存在争议。　　[2]用于引出对立观点。　　[3]“仅仅，只是”。　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。　　[5]“就…而言”。　　[6]用于连接并列成分。　　[7]“利大于弊”。　　[8]“扬长避短”。　　佳句临摹　　1.佳句：Theysayitcandonothingbutburdenthestudents.　　临摹：最终，不诚实只会带来麻烦。　　___________________________________________________________　　2.佳句：Examinationcanhelpteacherscheckhowmuchstudentshavelearnedaboutasubjectandthusknowwhatshouldbetheirteachingfocus.　　临摹：一些学生可能会把假期的大部分时间都用来娱乐，而因此荒废了学业。

21　　___________________________________________________________　　3.佳句：　　佳句：Theycannotonlyknowhowtheyhavestudiedbutalsofindoutwhattheyhaven’tmasteredwell.　　临摹：人们不仅需要生活必需品，还想生活得舒适。　　___________________________________________________________　　【KEY】　　1.Intheend,dishonestybringsnothingbuttroubles.　　2.Somestudentsmightspendmostoftheirholidaytimeonamusement,andthusleavetheirstudyneglected.　　3.Peoplenotonlyneedthebasicnecessitiesoflife,butalsowanttolivecomfortably.择业高工资与职业发展空间矛盾Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的　　2)阐述他们各自的考虑　　3)表明你的看法　　HighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?　　_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。　　高分范文　　HighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?　　Therearemoreandmorepeoplelookingforjobseveryyear,buttheyhavedifferentviewsaboutwhatkindofjobtheyshouldchoose.[1]Someofthemfocustheirattentiononthejobsthatpromisehighsalaries.[1]Othersshowapreferenceforthosejobsthatofferchancestolearnskillsandadvancementpossibilities.　　[2]Peopleholdingthefirstviewusuallythinkthatmoremoneywillresultinmorehappiness.[3]Withalotofmoneyinhand,theywillbeabletoenjoyarichlife.Otherwise,theywillsufferfromdepression[4]duetolackofenoughmoney.[2]However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatoneshoulddevelophisskillsasroundlyaspossible.[5]Itiscareerdevelopmentthatcountsmost.Withoutdevelopment,youwillbeoutrunbyothersandfallbehindthetimessoonerorlater.　　Inmyview,careerdevelopmentistherightchoicebecausecareermaygiveuslongtermsatisfaction[6]whilehighsalarywouldgiveusshorttermhappiness.Besides,[7]generally

22speaking,agoodcareerdevelopmentwillbringhighsalariessoonerorlater.SoIwill[8]givemyvotetothecareerdevelopmentfirstandthenhighsalaries.　　【亮点点评】　　[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。　　[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。　　[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。　　[4]“因为缺钱”。　　[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。　　[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。　　[7]“一般来说”。　　[8]“选择”。　　佳句临摹　　1.佳句：Othersshowapreferenceforthosejobsthatofferchancestolearnskillsandadvancementpossibilities.　　临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。　　___________________________________________________________　　2.佳句：However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatoneshoulddevelophisskillsasroundlyaspossible.　　临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。　　___________________________________________________________　　3.佳句：Careermaygiveuslongtermsatisfactionwhilehighsalarywouldgiveusshorttermhappiness.　　临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。　　___________________________________________________________　　【KEY】　　1.Inrecentyears,therearemoreandmorepeoplewhohaveshowedapreferenceforwesternfastfood.　　2.However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatsincesportsstarshavemadegreatcontributionstothesociety,theydeservesomespecialtreatment.　　3.Thesimilaritybetweenusmakesourrelationshipsolidwhilethedifferenceteachesushowtounderstandeachother.大学生就业难问题Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicEmploymentPressureFacingCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　　1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题　　2)分析导致该问题的原因　　3)大学生应该如何应对该问题EmploymentPressureFacingCollegeStudents_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

23　　行文思路　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。　　高分范文　　EmploymentPressureFacingCollegeStudents　　[1]Aboutadecadeago,universitystudentscouldfindsatisfactoryandenviablejobsaftertheirgraduation.[1]Butnow,thingsaredifferent.Today’suniversitystudentsusuallyexperiencegreatdifficultiesfindingsatisfactoryjobs.Theyoftencomplainthatgraduationmeansjoblessness.[2]Whatisthecauseofthisphenomenon?　　[3]Firstly,withtheenrollmentextensionofuniversities,[4]thesupplyofuniversitygraduatesexceedssocialdemand.Thisresultsinadecreasedchanceforanyindividualgraduatetofindajob.[3]Secondly,universitystudents[5]tendtospendmostoftheirtimeatschoolinstudyingacademicsubjectsandlackrelevantjobexperience.[3]Thirdly,somestudentsdon’tstudyhardduringthecollege.Afterfouryearsofuniversitylife,theyhaven’tgainedtheknowledgethosefairlygoodjobsorpositionsrequire.　　[6]Facingtheincreasinglyfiercecompetition,weuniversitystudentsshouldtryourbeststochangethissituation.[3]Aboveall,wheninschool,weshouldmakethemostofourtimeand[7]putourheartintoourstudies.[3]What’smore,wecantakepart-timejobsandattendsocialactivitiesinoursparetimeto[8]accumulaterelevantpracticalexperience.[3]Besides,whenweapplyforjobsaftergraduation,weshould[9]attachmoreimportancetoaccumulatingexperiencethantothestartingsalary.　　【亮点点评】　　[1]过去和现在进行对比。　　[2]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。　　[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。　　[4]“大学生供过于求”。　　[5]“倾向，趋于”。　　[6]“面对日趋激烈的竞争”，现在分词作状语。　　[7]“用心学习”。　　[8]“积累相关的实际经验”。　　[9]“更加关注”。　　佳句临摹　　1.佳句：Facingtheincreasinglyfiercecompetition,universitystudentsshouldtrytheirbesttochangethissituation.　　临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。　　___________________________________________________________　　2.佳句：Theyshouldattachmoreimportancetoaccumulatingexperiencethantotheirstartingsalary　　临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。　　___________________________________________________________　　【KEY】　　1.Havingexperiencedhardships,wewillknowbetterhowtosurvivecrisis.

24　　2.Obviously,weshouldattachmoreimportancetoone’sabilitiesthantohisdegree.