四级作文 (2)

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四级作文(2)1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto____.Somepeoplesuggestthat____.2.俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。Test99Thereisanoldsaying______.Itstheexperienceofourforefathers，however，itiscorrectinmanycaseseventoday.3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。Today,____,whichhavebroughtalotofharmsinourdailylife.First,____Second,____.Whatmakesthingsworseisthat______.4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。

1Nowadays，itiscommonto______.Manypeoplelike______because______.Test99的Besides，______.5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everythinghastwosidesand______isnotanexception，ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……的People’sopinionsabout______varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplesaythat______.Tothem,_____.7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。Manisnowfacingabigproblem______whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious. 

28.……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。______hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople，especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebatesarerightontheirway.9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。______hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.ithasTest99的broughtusalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？Accordingtothefigure/number/statistics/percentagesinthe/chart/bargraph/line/graph，itcanbeseenthat______while.Obviously，______，butwhy?（二）中间段落句

31.相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。Onthecontrary，therearesomepeopleinfavorof___.Atthesametime，theysay____.2.但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。ButIdontthinkitisaverygoodwaytosolve____.Forexample，____.WorstofTest99的all，___.3.……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……______isnecessaryandimportanttoourcountrysdevelopmentandconstruction.Test99的First，______.Whatsmore,_____.Mostimportantofall,______.4.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。Test99Thereareseveralmeasuresforustoadopt.First,wecan______

45.面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，Confrontedwith______，weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasuresto______.Foronething，______Foranother，______6.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。Itishightimethatsomethingwasdoneaboutit.Forexample._____.Inaddition.Test99的_____.Allthesemeasureswillcertainly______.7.为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……Test99Why______?Thefirstreasonisthat______.Thesecondreasonis______.ThethirdisTest99的______.Forallthis,themaincauseof______dueto______.

58.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。Test99However,justlikeeverythinghasbothitsgoodandbadsides,______alsohasitsownTest99的disadvantages,suchas______.9.尽管如此，我相信……更有利。Nonetheless,Ibelievethat______ismoreadvantageous.10.完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：Ifullyagreewiththestatementthat______because______.1-1对立法:先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.例如(e.g)[1].Whenaskedabout.....,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityofpeoplesaythat.......ButIthink/viewabitdifferently.

6[2].Whenitcomesto....,somepeoplebielivethat.......Othersargue/claimthattheopposite/reverseistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguements/statements,but(Itendtotheprofer/latter...)[3].Now,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledgedthat....Theyclaim/believe/arguethat...ButIwonder/doubtwhether.....1-2现象法引出要剖析的现象或者问题,然后评论.e.g[1].Recentlytheriseinproblemof/(phenomenonof)...has

7cause/arousedpublic/popular/wide/worldwideconcern.[2].Recentlytheissueoftheproblemof/thephenomenonof...hasbeenbroughtintofocus.(hasbeenbrouthtopublicattention)[3].Inflation/Corruption/Socialinequality...isyetanotherofthenewandbittertruthwehavetolearntofacenow/constantly.----- Tobecontinued!!1-3观点法----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.e.g:

8[1].Neverhistoryhasthechangeof..beenasevidentas...Nowhereintheworld/Chinahastheissue/ideaof..bennmorevisible/popularthan...[2].Nowpeopleingrowing/significantnumbersarebeginnig/comingtorealize/accept/(beaware)that...[3].Nowthereisagrowingawareness/recognationotthenecessityto......Nowpeoplebecomeincreasinglyaware/consciousoftheimportanceof......[4].Perhapsitistimetohaveafreshlookattheattitude/ideathat.......

91-4引用法-----先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法,来引出文章要展开论述的观点!e.g:[1]."Knowledgeispower."suchistheremarkmadebyBacon.Thisremarkhasbeensharedbymoreandmorepeople."Educationisnotcompletewithgradulation."SuchistheopnionofagreatAmericanphilosopher.Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharehisopnion.[2]."........."Howoftenwehearsuchstatements/wordslikethoses/this.

10Inourowndaysweareusedtohearingsuchtraditionalcomplainsasthis"......".1-5比较法------通过对过去,现在两种不同的倾向,观点的比较,引出文章要讨论的观点.e.g:[1].Foryears,...hadbeenviewedas...Butpeoplearetakingafreshlooknow.Withthegrowing...,people........[2].Peopleusedtothinkthat...(Inthepast,....)Butpeoplenowsharethisnew.1-6故事法----先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣,引出文章的主题.

11e.g:[1].Oncein(anewspaper),Ireadof/learnt....Thephenemenonof...hasarousedpublicconcern.[2].Ihaveafriendwho...Shouldhe....?Suchadilemmaweareoftenconfrontwithinourdailylife.[3].Onceuponatime,therelivedamanwho...Thisstorymaybe(unbelievable),butitstillhasarealisticsignificancenow.1-8问题法-----先用讨论或解答的设问,引出自己观点,;适用于有争议性的话题.

12e.g:Should/What......?Optionsof...varygreatly,some...,others...Butinmyopinion,.......目录一、应用文写作提示二、完整作文预测练习及范文（7篇）三、有标题，有范文，无提示（10篇）四、作文预测题（只有标题）（4篇）一、应用文写作提示二、完整作文预测练习及范文（7篇）完整作文预测练习及范文1whatjobsdocollegegraduateswanttotakedirections:studythefollowinggraphcarefullyandwriteanessayatleast150words.youressaymustbewrittenneatlyonanswersheetii.youressayshouldmeetthefollowingrequirements:1.目前大学毕业生的择业情况2.男、女同学就业选择的区别3.我的观点

13whatjobsdocollegegraduateswanttotakeitgoeswithoutsayingthatcollegestudentshaveaclearideaabouttheirfutureoccupation.boysaretosomeextentdifferentfromgirlsintheirchoiceasisseenfromthegraph.ascanbeseenfromthepicture,themoststrikingcontrastisintheoccupationofteaching:45%ofgirlstudentswouldliketobecometeachersaftergraduationwhereasonly5%ofboyswanttoteach.whatboysliketodomostistobecomemanagers(40%)andthesecondlargestgroupistobebusinessmen(30%).girlsalsoliketopursuethesetwoprofessions,withapercentageof15%and25%respectivelychoosingthesetwojobs.15%ofboyswanttobecomelawyerswhile10%ofgirlspreferringthisprofession.itcanbeeasilyprovedthatteachingispreferredbyfemalesasitprovidesamoreregularandpurerlife.women’spatiencealsofitsthejobwell.boysconsiderworkingasscientists,managers,businessmenandlawyersmoredemandingandexciting.itistruethatmoreboyswanttoshowtheirtalentsinthesefields.onethingnoteworthyisthatthenumbersofgirlswanttodobusinessisnotsmall.thisshowsthatgirlswanttotakechallengingandexciting

14jobs,too.nevertheless,itcanbeeasilyprovedthatnomatterwhatjobyouwillchoose,itwillbechallenging.asforme,ilikescienceandtechnology.withtheeconomicgrowthandsocialprogress,professionalsofscienceandtechnologywillbecomemoreandmoreimportantandwantedbythesociety.iwillchoosescienceasmycareer.完整作文预测练习及范文2collegestudentsandcellphones1.大学生使用手机人数在增多及其原因2.手机也给学生带来了一些问题3.你的观点collegestudentsandcellphoneswiththerapideconomicgrowth,moreandmorepeoplecanaffordtocellphoneforbettercommunication.collegestudentsarenotanexception.investigationsshowthatthenumberofcollegestudentshavingcellphoneisontheincreaseyearbyyear.onecauseforthisliesintheever-decreasingpriceofcellphone.everyonecanafforditnow.anothercauseisthatcellphoneisanefficientcommunicationtooloftoday.however,cellphonealsobringsaboutsomeproblems.it

15sometimesringsupatthewrongtimeandthereforeannoyspeople.whatisworseisthatitsometimesdistractsstudentsatwork.cellphonealsodrainsstudents’pocket.everythinghasadvantagesanddisadvantagesofitsown.inmyopinion,providedthatcollegestudentsuseitreasonably,cellphoneisrecommendableinthisepochofinformationandcommunication.完整作文预测练习及范文3directions:writealetterofnolessthan120wordstoyourneighbour,wholivesaboveyourapartmentinthesamebuildingandmakesalotofnoiserecentlyatnight.(heisprobablydoingsomeurgentwork.)yourlettershouldbepolitebuttellhimorherclearlythatyouwanthimtostopmakingnoiseatnightandwhy.writealetterinthespaceprovidedontheanswersheet.aletterdearsir(ormadam):sincerelyyourswangfangaletterdearsir:iamyourneighbourlivingjustunderyourapartmentinthis

16building.recentlyitseemsthatyoumakealotofnoiseslateatnight,probablyworkingonsomething.ithinkicanunderstandwhysomepeoplehavetoworkhardevenatnight.weareallsometimespressedbysomeurgentworkthathastobefinishedwithinalimitedperiodoftime.however,iwonderifyoucanreadjustyourworkingscheduleabittoavoidmakingnoiseslateatnight.thenoiseyoumakedisturbsmystudy.asiamgoingtograduatefromcollegethissummer,iambusypreparingformyfinalexams.thenoiseyoumakeatnighthasmadeitimpossibleformetoconcentrateonmystudy.besides,manyotherneighbourscomplainofit.oneneighbourcomplainsthatsheissufferingfromlackofsleepduetothenoiseandactuallymakesmistakesatworkthatdidn’thappeninthepast.tobebrief,ifyoucouldkindlychangeyourscheduleandmakelessnoise,allyourneighbours,includingmeofcourse,willfeelverymuchobligedtoyou.sincerelyyourswangfang完整作文预测练习及范文4myfirst

17jobdirections:forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionabout“myfirstjob”inthreeparagraphs,thefirstsentenceofeachparagraphisgiven.yourpartofwritingshouldbenolessthan120words.myfirstjobbeforeistartedatuniversity,________________________________________________.inagreathurry,_________________________________________________________.worstofallwasthat_________________________________.samplebeforeistartedatuniversity,itookmyfirstjobasawaitressinanicerestaurant.thatnightbeforemyfirstday,iwastooexcitedtogotosleepandasaresult,igotuplateinthemorning.ithrewonmyclothesandrushedtotherestaurant.inagreathurry,ididn’thearclearlytheheadwaiter’suctionthatweshouldgointothekitchenthroughonedoorandoutfromtheother.sowhenitooktwoplatesofeggsandbaconandanorangejuiceouttotherestaurant,iwent

18straighttowardsthewrongdoorandcollidedwithanotherwaitercomingin!worstofallwasthatiworeapairofsmartshoesbutwithhighheels!afewhourslateriwasinagonyyethadnotimetochangethem.bythetimewefinishedservingdinneratabout10:30iwascompletelyexhausted.thiswasmyfirstjob.nevertheless,ilearntsomethingfromit.大学四级考试写作的评分依据是：文章切切题，条理清楚，语言准确和字数符合要求。所谓切题就是看你写的作文跑不跑题。所谓条理是每一段的议论的正反清楚，描述的时间正确。语言准确要求作文的语法词汇使用正确，符合英语表达习惯。四级作文的字数要求不少于100字。针对四级考试的作文要求我们提出十二句作文法，这里所说的十二句作文法不仅包括一般英文写作的方法而且包括一套行之有效的写作方法。它的具体内容有以下几点。　　一审题　　我们拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是审题。审题的作用在于使你写作不跑题（如果跑题，条理和语言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。）那末审题要审什麽呢？　　1．体裁（议论文，说明文，描述文）

19　　审题就是要审作文的题材和体裁。因为什末样的体裁就会用什末样的题材去写。那末体裁包括那些呢？它包括议论文，说明文和描述文。从近些年看，四级作文不是单一的体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如：　　Directions:Forthispart,yourareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTryingtoBeAGoodUniversityStudent.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　１.做合格大学生的必要性　　２.做合格大学生的必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈）　　３.我计划这样做　　很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。这是片面的，因为，第一段要求写“...必要性”，这说明本段体裁是议论文；第二段要求写“...必备条件”，这说明本段要求写说明文；儿地三段要求写“...这样做”，这说明本段要求写描述文。所以在大多数情形下，四级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。　　2．根据不同体裁确定写作方法

20　　我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体，第二段为说明体，地三段为描述体。而各种文体又不同的写作方式：议论文；要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两方面来论述。例如上面第一段的思路是：做合格大学生，会怎末样（这是从正面论述）；不能做合格的大学生，会怎末样（从反面论述）；所以我们要做合格的大学生（结伦）。　　说明文：可以从几方面或几条来说明一个问题，就上作文而言，可以从方面（德智体）来说明合格大学生的必要性。　　描述文：一“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。与上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词，他要与第二段相互应进行描述。二确定主题句　　通过审题，我们知道该如何确定正确的写作思路。下边我们就谈如何些。第一部就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。例如上述三段主题句分别为：　　１.Itisverynecessarytobeagooduniversitystudent.（议论体的主题句）　　２.Thereareseveralrespectsofnecessitiestobeagooduniversitystudent.（说明体的主题句）　　３.WhatIwilldointhefutureisthefollowing

21.(描述体主题句)如果要求句是英语就可以把它变成主题句，例如这样一篇作文：GoodHealth１.Importanceofgoodhealth２.Waystokeepfit３.Myownpractice　　这样的作文的要求句就可以扩充成主题句。扩充后三段的主题句分别为：１.Itisveryimportanttohavegoodhealth.（将名词importance变成形容词important）２.Therearefourwaystokeepfitforme.（用therebe句型）３.Myownpracticesarethefollowing.（采用原词）　　三确保文章条理清楚　　保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务，第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清楚，对于描述文来说，谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Goodhealth来说，第一段保持正反面要清楚救应这样写：正面（Withgoodhealth,wecan...），反面（Withoutgoodhealth,wecandonothing.Wecan’tdo...）

22　　为了使文章更具有条理性，我们可以用first(ly)second(ly)third(ly)等副词，他们可以是文章的条例性更加突出。作文是主观题，想得告分就必须引起老师的主意，老师的时间很短（每篇作文只有一两分钟就要阅完），所以我们在列调试最好不用:Tobewith,...afterthat,...Andthen,...Thenext,...Thefollowing,...Aslast...。因为用这样的词语不利于老师看出你作文的条理性。　　四保证作文符合字数要求的十二句作文法　　考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多，因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点，另一方面又会占用过多的时间。写得太多还易跑题，一个有效的方法就是十二句作文法。　　我们知道，四级作文都是三段式。我们算一下，如果我们在每一段中写上四句，即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全片在十二句左右，每一句十多个词，就又120-150个字。大家可以试图找一些作文题练一练。